Review Detail of Armageddon_Pandora in The Only Leveling System

Item: The Only Leveling System
Rating: 3

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Armageddon_PandoraLv141yrArmageddon_Pandora

This boock his good for his background story and his caractères but, it has some big mistake like the time when the Mother of "Kaito" wanted to meet the MC but we never seen this, or when the Guild Master wanted his employe to make sure White was the MC, the overall story is fine but at some part its slow then to fast and slow again, so for the New reader i have to say go fine someting hels, at the same time its look like the book will be drop at this rate, thanks you for riding this and have a nice day.

The Only Leveling System

JUnknownC

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JUnknownCAuthorJUnknownC

Thanks for the review and feedback! I never really noticed that because I wrote chapters on the top of my mind. I definitely forget tons of stuff, and it’s pretty messy O_o The only solution I could think of is to make summaries. (I really do have goldfish memory, idk any better ways ToT)

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