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dukroger
dukrogerLv63yrdukroger

The story is not too bad, it is basically a first work of attempt by an author, with many *** scenes and many cliches. My biggest problem is that the MC ended up raping a character, he hears aphrodisiac drugs involved, even though it wasn't the MC himself that made the woman look like this, I couldn't keep reading. I have seen cases where women at parties were drugged or were heavily drunk and were raped. Esim, this is rape, you have *** with someone who is not aware or under strong drug effects, it is rape, and even though the author tried to justify things, the character of the MC at that point for me, was worth less than rubbish.

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wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

thank you for your critics, but i didn't justified that what the MC did is right tho -.-, i already admit that the MC is a bastard that still young and lack of self control, i couldn't made him change to someone mature after 1 night, i wonder if having *** in intoxicated condition consider a rape tho... hmmm or i always have this wrong perception about rape? idk if its this right or wrong, did the scene in the movie where the woman getting drunk and having *** with a guy considering a rape? if yes, then there is alot of movie where the MC having 1 night stand is consider a rape... but still idk lol as i myself isnot an expert in this issue heheh, thanks for the review anyway, i really appreciated it!

dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

Yes it is rape if the person is not able to think, and this is not just a movie, there were already famous scandals because of that, there was prison and everything. What most disappointed him was that before, even though he was a horny guy, he knew how to respect his slave, and I only slept with her when he realized she was comfortable, then there came this scene ... a man who sleeps with a woman who is drugged or who is not in her right mind, unfortunately this happens in reality, I have seen the case of after the event, women killing themselves, so it is not a case for fun, it is so much that you even put a scene where you still thought no being rape, being a clear case of rape, it makes me worried, in all sincerity, if people in such a situation do the same things and still think it's normal ...

wintermist1994:thank you for your critics, but i didn't justified that what the MC did is right tho -.-, i already admit that the MC is a bastard that still young and lack of self control, i couldn't made him change to someone mature after 1 night, i wonder if having *** in intoxicated condition consider a rape tho... hmmm or i always have this wrong perception about rape? idk if its this right or wrong, did the scene in the movie where the woman getting drunk and having *** with a guy considering a rape? if yes, then there is alot of movie where the MC having 1 night stand is consider a rape... but still idk lol as i myself isnot an expert in this issue heheh, thanks for the review anyway, i really appreciated it!
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

i never saw 1 myself so maybe its me being ignorant, all the people that i know always done with it and consider it as mistake after doing 1 night stand and act like nothing happen, it happen along time ago when i still in college tho. anyway thanks for the enlighten me~

dukroger:Yes it is rape if the person is not able to think, and this is not just a movie, there were already famous scandals because of that, there was prison and everything. What most disappointed him was that before, even though he was a horny guy, he knew how to respect his slave, and I only slept with her when he realized she was comfortable, then there came this scene ... a man who sleeps with a woman who is drugged or who is not in her right mind, unfortunately this happens in reality, I have seen the case of after the event, women killing themselves, so it is not a case for fun, it is so much that you even put a scene where you still thought no being rape, being a clear case of rape, it makes me worried, in all sincerity, if people in such a situation do the same things and still think it's normal ...
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

and FYI what happen with his slave and Al is different case, the night with his slave he could hold it because he is in normal condition, the night with Al he is being drugged that increase his libido greatly... so with this logic it more made sense if the MC follow his instinct as he is not in normal condition, and with Al approach, i wonder how many normal man could hold it?. still itsnot that i want to make him a rapist as i never consider it to be one when i design this plot (before you told me about the issue). but i already noted your story, and consider it carefully when designing a new plot later, thanks

dukroger:Yes it is rape if the person is not able to think, and this is not just a movie, there were already famous scandals because of that, there was prison and everything. What most disappointed him was that before, even though he was a horny guy, he knew how to respect his slave, and I only slept with her when he realized she was comfortable, then there came this scene ... a man who sleeps with a woman who is drugged or who is not in her right mind, unfortunately this happens in reality, I have seen the case of after the event, women killing themselves, so it is not a case for fun, it is so much that you even put a scene where you still thought no being rape, being a clear case of rape, it makes me worried, in all sincerity, if people in such a situation do the same things and still think it's normal ...
dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

In the chapter itself, you confirmed that he was not affected, due to him having various resistances and immunities to poisons and things like that, the fact is, that in this chapter you hear a breakdown of the character, of a man with desires, but who would know if control, and maintain the minimum respect that you should have with yourself and with women, for a guy who talks, any MLF who wants to sleep with me and have *** I accept, since he knew that the woman was drugged! I'm sorry, but that was the end, I could accept many things, since it is your first story and you were based on a known genre to have more support and everything, that and the story has a great herotism, this could all be I accepted, but the attitude of the MC in this captain sincerely made me give up, I already removed it from my library. I wish you luck, friend.

wintermist1994:and FYI what happen with his slave and Al is different case, the night with his slave he could hold it because he is in normal condition, the night with Al he is being drugged that increase his libido greatly... so with this logic it more made sense if the MC follow his instinct as he is not in normal condition, and with Al approach, i wonder how many normal man could hold it?. still itsnot that i want to make him a rapist as i never consider it to be one when i design this plot (before you told me about the issue). but i already noted your story, and consider it carefully when designing a new plot later, thanks
dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

When two people are drunk, and something like that happens, it is usually considered a mistake for both of them, or they may even get something good out of it, but it is rare. Now when one of the two, they are aware and still know that the other person is drugged or out of it for any reason, and even though they know that they still have *** with that person, this is considered rape. As I said, I have seen real cases, in which people were prosecuted and arrested under these exact circumstances. But really many films and other forms of entertainment should be more careful to obey the theme, if really as you mentioned, this is shown as normal behavior, it is very dangerous, because it can encourage people to commit criminal and immoral acts without even knowing it. I will leave another example, hear a famous case in my country, a girl I go out with a guy and had *** with, she drank a lot, a lot more, at some point she became unconscious, and the guy called several friends and made an orgy with girl, even though she is often unconscious or out of it, it was filmed, she hears a lot of controversy later, until today I don’t know if these guys were arrested or even killed by people in the community where they lived. I just want to show that, having *** with someone outside of themselves or unconscious, being that the other person is sober or at least with almost full mental faculties, is considered rape and is immoral and illegal, and can have very serious consequences.

wintermist1994:i never saw 1 myself so maybe its me being ignorant, all the people that i know always done with it and consider it as mistake after doing 1 night stand and act like nothing happen, it happen along time ago when i still in college tho. anyway thanks for the enlighten me~
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

wait let me read it for awhile.... yes i already checked it, and he is affected by poison, but not negative status condition (completely Lost his consciousness) I read that he could feel boundless strength......... spoiler..........(you could check it yourself) . . So yeah, anyway his skill only immune in negative condition, and the drug effect that enhance his libido isnot 1 of negative condition, so he couldnot completely immune to the drug.

dukroger:In the chapter itself, you confirmed that he was not affected, due to him having various resistances and immunities to poisons and things like that, the fact is, that in this chapter you hear a breakdown of the character, of a man with desires, but who would know if control, and maintain the minimum respect that you should have with yourself and with women, for a guy who talks, any MLF who wants to sleep with me and have *** I accept, since he knew that the woman was drugged! I'm sorry, but that was the end, I could accept many things, since it is your first story and you were based on a known genre to have more support and everything, that and the story has a great herotism, this could all be I accepted, but the attitude of the MC in this captain sincerely made me give up, I already removed it from my library. I wish you luck, friend.
dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

I read it again, he clearly realized that both tihams were drugged, but he himself says he was still lucid, due to resistance to venoms or abnormal states, but he chose to act, according to him, not to be the same as Japanese characters, and regardless of the woman drugged or not. Let's be honest friend .... this is obviously rape .... Before she could stimulate him or anything, he should screen knocked out, since she was completely out of it! And just leaving her that way could be dangerous if she was still awake. What matters is that the MC was with his good mental faculties, even if he was excited, the act of having *** with a drug addict was the choice of the MC. And yes, from that moment on, he became a rapist. People like that deserve a good spanking and to be chemically castrated sincerely. what I think happened is that you wanted to speed things up between these characters, and you didn’t realize that you ended up generating an unnecessary situation and even that it hindered the story a little. I may be mistaken, but that is the image that remains when you read this chapter.

wintermist1994:wait let me read it for awhile.... yes i already checked it, and he is affected by poison, but not negative status condition (completely Lost his consciousness) I read that he could feel boundless strength......... spoiler..........(you could check it yourself) . . So yeah, anyway his skill only immune in negative condition, and the drug effect that enhance his libido isnot 1 of negative condition, so he couldnot completely immune to the drug.
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

Lets be honest friend.... if you in his shoes you will act like him too if you are a normal man.... i wonder that is there some man could hold it if they are already horny because of a drug and let it be like gentleman.... maybe there is, if he is a gay, i amnot trying to denied that what he did is a rape or not, if you think he is rape than is your choice, but i just want to justified why he act like that, because he is a human, don't forget that MC is just normal human male, he is not a god even tho he got that cheat ability is still not change his human nature, and with his fetishes like that i just justified why he act like that... you can judge him whatever you want. If i read a novel and there is the same situation like that , and the MC choose to hold it and act like gentleman i will call it BS and hypocrite, Man, always follow his instinct when they are horny, and that's is a fact. thats is my opinion, thank you

dukroger:I read it again, he clearly realized that both tihams were drugged, but he himself says he was still lucid, due to resistance to venoms or abnormal states, but he chose to act, according to him, not to be the same as Japanese characters, and regardless of the woman drugged or not. Let's be honest friend .... this is obviously rape .... Before she could stimulate him or anything, he should screen knocked out, since she was completely out of it! And just leaving her that way could be dangerous if she was still awake. What matters is that the MC was with his good mental faculties, even if he was excited, the act of having *** with a drug addict was the choice of the MC. And yes, from that moment on, he became a rapist. People like that deserve a good spanking and to be chemically castrated sincerely. what I think happened is that you wanted to speed things up between these characters, and you didn’t realize that you ended up generating an unnecessary situation and even that it hindered the story a little. I may be mistaken, but that is the image that remains when you read this chapter.
dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

I have already been through a similar situation, I went out with an acquaintance, she became very drunk, and I respected her, even though there is a bid between us and attraction, as a result we had other chances to leave, and there was a colorful friendship with her for a long time. .And it only ended when this woman friend moved from the country. It is not being a gentleman, it is having the minimum of character and good sense, not to act like an animal in heat, and knowing how to respect other people, if someone is out of their reason and mind, for whatever reason, sometimes some emotional trauma or because of substances, such as beverages or drugs, and the other human being, uses it to take advantage, whether sexual or otherwise, the person who acted like that is a despicable scoundrel. I feel sorry for the world, if many other men have the same thoughts as you, and think that abusing someone, who is out of the ordinary, to quantities of sexual abuse all over the planet, must be a ridiculously large number, and what is worse is that, the abusers will still think in their minds, that they will not commit a crime.

wintermist1994:Lets be honest friend.... if you in his shoes you will act like him too if you are a normal man.... i wonder that is there some man could hold it if they are already horny because of a drug and let it be like gentleman.... maybe there is, if he is a gay, i amnot trying to denied that what he did is a rape or not, if you think he is rape than is your choice, but i just want to justified why he act like that, because he is a human, don't forget that MC is just normal human male, he is not a god even tho he got that cheat ability is still not change his human nature, and with his fetishes like that i just justified why he act like that... you can judge him whatever you want. If i read a novel and there is the same situation like that , and the MC choose to hold it and act like gentleman i will call it BS and hypocrite, Man, always follow his instinct when they are horny, and that's is a fact. thats is my opinion, thank you
dukroger
dukrogerLv6dukroger

I can understand your point of view, I just believe, that in case someone is out of their conscience, if another person takes advantage of it, it is an immoral and often scoundrel act. Not only in the case of sexual intercourse, but also in other ways. And in the case of history, the MC was aware, he knew he had an aphrodisiac in his drink, and that although it didn't have much effect on him, it severely affected the woman he was with. A man who, in this situation, takes advantage of the condition of the other person, and still makes a comparison with other men, meaning that he is not a guy like those in Japanese histories, who are usually indifferent or do not perceive things in relation to feelings and sexual relations, at the end of it all and still say that any woman that interests him, he will sleep with them, and again the woman he was with was drugged, even if he was not the one who put the drug, it was a rape, if both were drugged and out of their normal mental faculties, both would be a victim, but in the case of the man is aware and still decide to continue with things, regardless of the state of the woman he was with, it was a clear case of abuse and rape. For that kind of thing, I decided to quit reading, I sincerely believe that the author did it, partly to answer people who were afraid of the story becoming a Japanese isekai, and partly to speed things up, but in the end it was done in a lamentable way.

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JosePascua
JosePascuaLv4JosePascua

I absolutely agree with you, in every comment you have made. And adding that the author tries to make excuses that it is not rape, when even a blind man can tell you 100% that it is rape, this makes it ... disgusting. I am really concerned about this author's mental health, or safety of the people who are close to he. After all, for he not to see anything wrong with this, or to try to deny it vehemently or determination when he probably knows that if it is rape, makes them have to be careful around people like this.

dukroger:I can understand your point of view, I just believe, that in case someone is out of their conscience, if another person takes advantage of it, it is an immoral and often scoundrel act. Not only in the case of sexual intercourse, but also in other ways. And in the case of history, the MC was aware, he knew he had an aphrodisiac in his drink, and that although it didn't have much effect on him, it severely affected the woman he was with. A man who, in this situation, takes advantage of the condition of the other person, and still makes a comparison with other men, meaning that he is not a guy like those in Japanese histories, who are usually indifferent or do not perceive things in relation to feelings and sexual relations, at the end of it all and still say that any woman that interests him, he will sleep with them, and again the woman he was with was drugged, even if he was not the one who put the drug, it was a rape, if both were drugged and out of their normal mental faculties, both would be a victim, but in the case of the man is aware and still decide to continue with things, regardless of the state of the woman he was with, it was a clear case of abuse and rape. For that kind of thing, I decided to quit reading, I sincerely believe that the author did it, partly to answer people who were afraid of the story becoming a Japanese isekai, and partly to speed things up, but in the end it was done in a lamentable way.
JosePascua
JosePascuaLv4JosePascua

Man, please seek psychological help if you can't even begin to understand that what the MC did was 100% rape, no matter how much you try to deny it or in what point of view you try to place yourself. I will give you a url on what is considered rape, if you still don't understand, you need urgent mind help. - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rape#:~:text=Rape%20is%20defined%20in%20most,a%20victim%20without%20their%20consent.&text=Until%202012%2C%20the%20Federal%20Bureau,committed%20by%20men%20against%20women.

wintermist1994:Lets be honest friend.... if you in his shoes you will act like him too if you are a normal man.... i wonder that is there some man could hold it if they are already horny because of a drug and let it be like gentleman.... maybe there is, if he is a gay, i amnot trying to denied that what he did is a rape or not, if you think he is rape than is your choice, but i just want to justified why he act like that, because he is a human, don't forget that MC is just normal human male, he is not a god even tho he got that cheat ability is still not change his human nature, and with his fetishes like that i just justified why he act like that... you can judge him whatever you want. If i read a novel and there is the same situation like that , and the MC choose to hold it and act like gentleman i will call it BS and hypocrite, Man, always follow his instinct when they are horny, and that's is a fact. thats is my opinion, thank you
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

this again -.- did you read the TAG? its perverted protagonist that TAG there! so please expect something that's not impossible! i know he is rapping then so what?! its not like i rapist in real life anyway! its just story and i just write what i think it make sense to a MALE like MC! so stop with your SJW mindset here! because its just story, if you guys wanna be SJW go to the twitter or something. don't expect moral or whatever your think is right here -.- sigh... this day is really stressful.. . HERE FOR YOU TO MAKE YOU ALL SATISFIED! MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD MC IS RAPIST BASTARD ! THERE! GOOD DAY!

JosePascua:Man, please seek psychological help if you can't even begin to understand that what the MC did was 100% rape, no matter how much you try to deny it or in what point of view you try to place yourself. I will give you a url on what is considered rape, if you still don't understand, you need urgent mind help. - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rape#:~:text=Rape%20is%20defined%20in%20most,a%20victim%20without%20their%20consent.&text=Until%202012%2C%20the%20Federal%20Bureau,committed%20by%20men%20against%20women.
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

and one more thing, stop insulting people with mental problem, you could really killed someone if that person is weakminded. AND i never justified MC behavior! I JUSTIFIED why he DID that ! good day sir!

JosePascua:Man, please seek psychological help if you can't even begin to understand that what the MC did was 100% rape, no matter how much you try to deny it or in what point of view you try to place yourself. I will give you a url on what is considered rape, if you still don't understand, you need urgent mind help. - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rape#:~:text=Rape%20is%20defined%20in%20most,a%20victim%20without%20their%20consent.&text=Until%202012%2C%20the%20Federal%20Bureau,committed%20by%20men%20against%20women.
JosePascua
JosePascuaLv4JosePascua

err... calm down man(Please read calmly to the end), I said, if you don't understand, you need help, but if you understand, you can ignore anything related to your mental health, besides where I say 'disgusting' is the feeling that someone defends a rape, it was not you who insult. For example, at the end of my comment, if you were really wrong this way... would you tell me that it would not be dangerous for you or someone else? That's what I'm trying to imply. Plus, you say it's rape, right? You see it? How much does it cost to say ?, just put the tag #rape and all the problems are over of that. Tip: Don't make the MC impulsive, so it does things it should do just because the current is driving it. The Japanese term beta mc is a term to tell an MC that he is too shy, insecure and possibly previously bullied, but may or may not progress and become an incredible mc. While the term 'Prince-MC in a negative way' or 'Pussy-MC', is for the MCs that even if a woman is literally in her bed with her legs spread, both are in love with the other etc, the very 'Pussy' try to find excuses, situations etc, to get the out of that situation in order not to have intimacy with the woman. By the way, the advice is with the intention of informing you about what I know, and what I have been told that mc-this or mc-that means. By the way, I'm reading your story and it's not bad at all. Compared to others I've seen... believe me this would be gold. about the excuse was because you did not admit it and voila.

wintermist1994:and one more thing, stop insulting people with mental problem, you could really killed someone if that person is weakminded. AND i never justified MC behavior! I JUSTIFIED why he DID that ! good day sir!
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

why am i dangerous? i am not serial killer, and is not like i am a kid that didn't know what is right and wrong. i just tired when you guys take my stance as how the MC mind working as my original mind. you already know i put Perverted protagonist Tag there for a reason. and it's just fantasy dude. that's why I write on the review, i need to vent this fantasy to somewhere and stabilized my self as human being. you could call it, its the dark side of me as human being. everyone has their own darkside, and I vent this dark side with writing and make a story here to become controllable. and i found a new passion after writing these novel. i already tired with this shitty live of mine that didn't have a reason and goal... really... i just found a new purpose here, by writing my first time shit. i just want to treat this writing thing as my therapy and cure my low self esteem. i want to leave something in this world too... and as shitty as this novel could be, but its really precious to me, this novel sentimental value is too high for me. even, in the future people treat this novel as a shame, but not for me and as you said, i know that i have some mental health problem, i have this social anxiety that make me afraid and nervous when talking to other people. i stop doing social media for this reason, as you can see, in this judgemental society, the words that their spew out unconsciously really hurt me somehow. i want to cure myself to be normal, but is not easy with just a talking. so somehow, your words that said i should go to check my mental health is an insult for me, because you are not here beside me and show your "REAL" compassion. that's why i just warn you, that your compassion with that stuff could hurt someone, as you just typing it behind your screen and not deal with the real person in real life. I as the one who "sick" feel that way. but, i doesn't mean i hate you guys or something. just this day is really stressful for me. sorry... and for dark(the reviewer), i learned new thing, he already told me what is consider rape is, and i already forged it in my mind, and learned this raping stuff. what i just justified is the way MC judgement and his way of thinking that make him make a mistake. he is just perverted MC, and as a perverted man, he has to act the way I design him.

JosePascua:err... calm down man(Please read calmly to the end), I said, if you don't understand, you need help, but if you understand, you can ignore anything related to your mental health, besides where I say 'disgusting' is the feeling that someone defends a rape, it was not you who insult. For example, at the end of my comment, if you were really wrong this way... would you tell me that it would not be dangerous for you or someone else? That's what I'm trying to imply. Plus, you say it's rape, right? You see it? How much does it cost to say ?, just put the tag #rape and all the problems are over of that. Tip: Don't make the MC impulsive, so it does things it should do just because the current is driving it. The Japanese term beta mc is a term to tell an MC that he is too shy, insecure and possibly previously bullied, but may or may not progress and become an incredible mc. While the term 'Prince-MC in a negative way' or 'Pussy-MC', is for the MCs that even if a woman is literally in her bed with her legs spread, both are in love with the other etc, the very 'Pussy' try to find excuses, situations etc, to get the out of that situation in order not to have intimacy with the woman. By the way, the advice is with the intention of informing you about what I know, and what I have been told that mc-this or mc-that means. By the way, I'm reading your story and it's not bad at all. Compared to others I've seen... believe me this would be gold. about the excuse was because you did not admit it and voila.
wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

and FYI i want to put #rape tag after i know this thing but its already full. blame the webnovel to limited the tag the novel should have

wintermist1994:why am i dangerous? i am not serial killer, and is not like i am a kid that didn't know what is right and wrong. i just tired when you guys take my stance as how the MC mind working as my original mind. you already know i put Perverted protagonist Tag there for a reason. and it's just fantasy dude. that's why I write on the review, i need to vent this fantasy to somewhere and stabilized my self as human being. you could call it, its the dark side of me as human being. everyone has their own darkside, and I vent this dark side with writing and make a story here to become controllable. and i found a new passion after writing these novel. i already tired with this shitty live of mine that didn't have a reason and goal... really... i just found a new purpose here, by writing my first time shit. i just want to treat this writing thing as my therapy and cure my low self esteem. i want to leave something in this world too... and as shitty as this novel could be, but its really precious to me, this novel sentimental value is too high for me. even, in the future people treat this novel as a shame, but not for me and as you said, i know that i have some mental health problem, i have this social anxiety that make me afraid and nervous when talking to other people. i stop doing social media for this reason, as you can see, in this judgemental society, the words that their spew out unconsciously really hurt me somehow. i want to cure myself to be normal, but is not easy with just a talking. so somehow, your words that said i should go to check my mental health is an insult for me, because you are not here beside me and show your "REAL" compassion. that's why i just warn you, that your compassion with that stuff could hurt someone, as you just typing it behind your screen and not deal with the real person in real life. I as the one who "sick" feel that way. but, i doesn't mean i hate you guys or something. just this day is really stressful for me. sorry... and for dark(the reviewer), i learned new thing, he already told me what is consider rape is, and i already forged it in my mind, and learned this raping stuff. what i just justified is the way MC judgement and his way of thinking that make him make a mistake. he is just perverted MC, and as a perverted man, he has to act the way I design him.
JosePascua
JosePascuaLv4JosePascua

I see ... if you want to de-stress and have calming moments etc., you should read novels or fics 'Slice of Life' or 'Slow Life', and you should occasionally have some romance, fight or action. -I have not said that you are dangerous, if not that people with that wrong thought were (about what is rape), however since you are not, just ignore it ok?, You already made your point and everything is fine now. If you have problems about being hurt by the things they say on the internet or in society... I don't know what it was called, but I think it was something like motivational videos, to raise spirits or something like that. Once i was depressed something like you.(something like that), and watching several of those videos helped me a lot. They tell you that you shouldn't let outside things hurt you or something. You can search for videos that concern your mood or emotional sensitivity. /Ps\: I'm already sleepy :v

wintermist1994:why am i dangerous? i am not serial killer, and is not like i am a kid that didn't know what is right and wrong. i just tired when you guys take my stance as how the MC mind working as my original mind. you already know i put Perverted protagonist Tag there for a reason. and it's just fantasy dude. that's why I write on the review, i need to vent this fantasy to somewhere and stabilized my self as human being. you could call it, its the dark side of me as human being. everyone has their own darkside, and I vent this dark side with writing and make a story here to become controllable. and i found a new passion after writing these novel. i already tired with this shitty live of mine that didn't have a reason and goal... really... i just found a new purpose here, by writing my first time shit. i just want to treat this writing thing as my therapy and cure my low self esteem. i want to leave something in this world too... and as shitty as this novel could be, but its really precious to me, this novel sentimental value is too high for me. even, in the future people treat this novel as a shame, but not for me and as you said, i know that i have some mental health problem, i have this social anxiety that make me afraid and nervous when talking to other people. i stop doing social media for this reason, as you can see, in this judgemental society, the words that their spew out unconsciously really hurt me somehow. i want to cure myself to be normal, but is not easy with just a talking. so somehow, your words that said i should go to check my mental health is an insult for me, because you are not here beside me and show your "REAL" compassion. that's why i just warn you, that your compassion with that stuff could hurt someone, as you just typing it behind your screen and not deal with the real person in real life. I as the one who "sick" feel that way. but, i doesn't mean i hate you guys or something. just this day is really stressful for me. sorry... and for dark(the reviewer), i learned new thing, he already told me what is consider rape is, and i already forged it in my mind, and learned this raping stuff. what i just justified is the way MC judgement and his way of thinking that make him make a mistake. he is just perverted MC, and as a perverted man, he has to act the way I design him.
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I understand perfectly what you meant. The big problem was that, in most of the comments, the author seemed to want to defend the MC, and that in all that happened, he did not hear rape. That this was just a mistake, that the two people involved made, the problem is that whoever analyzes everything that happened, will easily see that the scene showed a rape action. Honestly I believe that the author makes this story to relax, and did not pay attention to it at the time, but I believe that in addition to having generated a character break even led the level of the story to fall, because in general it is not really a bad story , it may not be a masterpiece of literature, but it is not something that can be called too bad or something.

JosePascua:I see ... if you want to de-stress and have calming moments etc., you should read novels or fics 'Slice of Life' or 'Slow Life', and you should occasionally have some romance, fight or action. -I have not said that you are dangerous, if not that people with that wrong thought were (about what is rape), however since you are not, just ignore it ok?, You already made your point and everything is fine now. If you have problems about being hurt by the things they say on the internet or in society... I don't know what it was called, but I think it was something like motivational videos, to raise spirits or something like that. Once i was depressed something like you.(something like that), and watching several of those videos helped me a lot. They tell you that you shouldn't let outside things hurt you or something. You can search for videos that concern your mood or emotional sensitivity. /Ps\: I'm already sleepy :v
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