Review Detail of Will_Caruso in Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
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just wanted to check if you new that your story can no longer be read on a computer and only on a cellphone. If so then I guess I will stop supporting your story. Thanks for for writing such a good story!
Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician
KasiCair
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overall your story is great just need a little work and you have a very very good story. do not quit I know how hard it can be but you have some great ideas!!!
KasiCair:Yeah, it kinda screwed hard with me. I dunno. I'll wait and see where this goes. I will definitely continue posting all my pre-written chapters on webnovel until I run out of them... but I have no idea if I will continue writing this story or not. This last update was kinda the last nail in the coffin. I had misgivings about this story of mine and I made many mistakes in it, the slow pacing one of the major ones, but now this PC restriction kinda nailed it for me. I might change platforms or I might even completely stop writing fanfics. I really have no idea. But if this update stays, there is no point in continuing to write on webnovel.
Yeah, it kinda screwed hard with me. I dunno. I'll wait and see where this goes. I will definitely continue posting all my pre-written chapters on webnovel until I run out of them... but I have no idea if I will continue writing this story or not. This last update was kinda the last nail in the coffin. I had misgivings about this story of mine and I made many mistakes in it, the slow pacing one of the major ones, but now this PC restriction kinda nailed it for me. I might change platforms or I might even completely stop writing fanfics. I really have no idea. But if this update stays, there is no point in continuing to write on webnovel.
Please continue the story, i really liked it so far. Besides, you always switch to another site, like Scribblehub, Ao3, Fanfiction.net etc. You might even reach a far bigger audience.
KasiCair:Yeah, it kinda screwed hard with me. I dunno. I'll wait and see where this goes. I will definitely continue posting all my pre-written chapters on webnovel until I run out of them... but I have no idea if I will continue writing this story or not. This last update was kinda the last nail in the coffin. I had misgivings about this story of mine and I made many mistakes in it, the slow pacing one of the major ones, but now this PC restriction kinda nailed it for me. I might change platforms or I might even completely stop writing fanfics. I really have no idea. But if this update stays, there is no point in continuing to write on webnovel.
No dejes caer está novela autor, estoy seguro de que hay muchas personas además de mi que amamos esta novela, estoy arto de ver cómo buenas novelas y autores desaparecen por culpa de los malditos hater que ni siquiera se esfuerzan en leer la novela.
KasiCair:Yeah, it kinda screwed hard with me. I dunno. I'll wait and see where this goes. I will definitely continue posting all my pre-written chapters on webnovel until I run out of them... but I have no idea if I will continue writing this story or not. This last update was kinda the last nail in the coffin. I had misgivings about this story of mine and I made many mistakes in it, the slow pacing one of the major ones, but now this PC restriction kinda nailed it for me. I might change platforms or I might even completely stop writing fanfics. I really have no idea. But if this update stays, there is no point in continuing to write on webnovel.
I think that's shame. I like your story it has some problems ,pacing being one of them,but nothing major. It is still one of better fanfiction out there. I think that most people on this site have seen too many bad crossovers and that in beginning there where many criticism because of that, but you have merged worlds excellently. I have seen some truly unique explainacions of contracts of devil's and how they got bloodlines(i was very impressed by that). Anyway i am trying to say that your fic is very good and there is nothing in it you can't improve by just continuing story (like just make pacing faster in the next chapters). You shouldn't get discouraged because it is not perfect. I think you should go to another site , although they changed so you can read fanfiction on PC on this site you never know if they will do this kind of thing again.
KasiCair:Yeah, it kinda screwed hard with me. I dunno. I'll wait and see where this goes. I will definitely continue posting all my pre-written chapters on webnovel until I run out of them... but I have no idea if I will continue writing this story or not. This last update was kinda the last nail in the coffin. I had misgivings about this story of mine and I made many mistakes in it, the slow pacing one of the major ones, but now this PC restriction kinda nailed it for me. I might change platforms or I might even completely stop writing fanfics. I really have no idea. But if this update stays, there is no point in continuing to write on webnovel.
KasiCair:Yeah, it kinda screwed hard with me. I dunno. I'll wait and see where this goes. I will definitely continue posting all my pre-written chapters on webnovel until I run out of them... but I have no idea if I will continue writing this story or not. This last update was kinda the last nail in the coffin. I had misgivings about this story of mine and I made many mistakes in it, the slow pacing one of the major ones, but now this PC restriction kinda nailed it for me. I might change platforms or I might even completely stop writing fanfics. I really have no idea. But if this update stays, there is no point in continuing to write on webnovel.