Review Detail of mrCat in Sin of Kin
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ummm... yeah, the novel has a good story and a good plot, no doubt... but it lacks in writing. It's the first work of the author so, yeah, mistakes are expected. Overall, the novel has a good story, but it also has a good amount of grammar mistakes, so it can be hard to understand, but if u put those minor grammar mistakes aside, yeah... it's a good one. (I haven't read all chapters, just a few chapters so, don't take my words seriously)
Sin of Kin
Houraji
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Thank you for spending your precious time for reading my story, really. appreciate it. However, would you like to "describe" in detail about that lack in writing? And are my grammar mistakes so bad that you were having a difficulty to understand it? I saw you just read the first few chapters, would you mind to tell me which chapters that difficult to understand? After all I want to rewrite those first few chapters. It's not that I doubting your constructive review, but you are the first person who told me there's a difficulty to understand the story. I want to fix it right away. I'm truly sorry for the inconvenience, for english is not my native language... though I'll try my best to minimal the mistakes. Once again, thank you very much for your constructive review.
its not like u made many mistakes, rather than grammer, I would say that... the grammer is okay, but what's wrong is u added few words here and there that made the meaning of Para a little off but once u avoid those words or won't mid it. the story is really good
Houraji:Thank you for spending your precious time for reading my story, really. appreciate it. However, would you like to "describe" in detail about that lack in writing? And are my grammar mistakes so bad that you were having a difficulty to understand it? I saw you just read the first few chapters, would you mind to tell me which chapters that difficult to understand? After all I want to rewrite those first few chapters. It's not that I doubting your constructive review, but you are the first person who told me there's a difficulty to understand the story. I want to fix it right away. I'm truly sorry for the inconvenience, for english is not my native language... though I'll try my best to minimal the mistakes. Once again, thank you very much for your constructive review.
Ah, you mean the "figure of speech" I used a bit... redundant? Because I did use that kind of phrase quite a lot becoming my habit, similar to this (...) đ
mrCat:its not like u made many mistakes, rather than grammer, I would say that... the grammer is okay, but what's wrong is u added few words here and there that made the meaning of Para a little off but once u avoid those words or won't mid it. the story is really good
Houraji:Ah, you mean the "figure of speech" I used a bit... redundant? Because I did use that kind of phrase quite a lot becoming my habit, similar to this (...) đ
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there are like 3 person that reviewed it the rest are probably bots becoz many of them just post one review didn't read anything and also were created this year and also he just spam the novel that's on his own account
mrCat:ahahaa already read it, it's F amazing