Review Detail of Anotoki in Sin of Kin

Item: Sin of Kin
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

AnotokiLv113yrAnotoki

The pace is decent and the characters are well written. The first few chapters kinda weird though but it was still good nevertheless. The story has a lot of potentials but I recommend you to edit it, especially for the first few chapters. They play a crucial role that makes readers read more

Sin of Kin

Houraji

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HourajiAuthorHouraji

Thanks a lot for for your suggestion. But if you don't mind, could you tell which chapters and what make it weird? Is it the grammar or something else? Still, I'm gonna re-read and check it, then try my best to edit it. I thank you once again.

3yr