Review Detail of Littlepunnie in Dream turns into Reality

Hello! I have to admit that I was intrigued and was engrossed in reading your book. I am not a fan of reading novels with first person point of view, thus my initial say was like ' Ah, first person POV ' but it did not stopped me from reading, neither the grammar mistakes turned me off to leave the book. The Prologue was very engaging, I love it because I often leave paragraph comments especially with those kinds of things. I'm hoping to read more and I'll look further to your novel. The main character has a tragic background story, thus it made me, the readers sympathize and empathize to the main lead/ character. My impression of the main character was blanch to be honest, he was cowardly but he has a strong morale thus making him go with it, tell it, help them. Grammar errors can be corrected through editing or using apps such as Grammarly, Proofreader etc. so I can no longer tell you anything else. Last night, I've dreamed of a black painted room, it was a room full of imaginative shadows, you made me remember ' big bad guy ' whom I often get to dream with. I was wearing a big puffy, ball gown dress that time, but it feels like I'm a different person or something like that. Im sure it was in medieval times. Thank you for your great story. Happy Writing!