It's a nice story with a unique plot.
I like the idea that someone can use dreams to influence reality. It is a superpower on its own. ππ
Keep up the good work!
That said, you could edit all chapters for grammar issues either with an editor who is good at English, or at least with tools like grammarly.com.
It's not bad, I mean... I can understand while reading, however, polishing up your work will attract more readers. π