Review Detail of YouthGod in Dream turns into Reality

So, I will be giving my honest opinions as a reader. I very like the idea of the story and it have a lot of potential in my opinion. Though, I hope that the mistakes can be fix so that it improves the reading experience as sometimes it bugs my brain. Though, I also make a lot of mistakes so... yeah. The author is a great storyteller, the story is captivating and if the mistakes can be fix, a lot of improvement will be seen. Anyway, I like the story a lot. Keep up the good work author!