Review Detail of Jim_Odette_D in Death Korp of Krieg (WH40K) | Justice League (DC-Comics)
Review detail
Author's Perspective upon own work Writing Quality - Constructions are made neat, the character's dialogue and monologue can be easily identified, and is formed in an easy flow and continuation to prevent tongue-twisting and mind breaking. (3S) Stability of Updates - Terrible, has no scheduled timing, and is absolutely up to the Author when he has the next chapter prepared. Updates are random. (1S) Story Development - A slow grind, with a lot of character background in most chapters, but still making progress for story development. It is your typical, character flashback but doesn't take the whole chapter. (3S) Character Design - Two Korpsmen, One is a battle-hardened veteren, and the other somewhat in between gets yeeted to the DC universe. There is fixed and focused personality on the character, so readers could be able to tell the difference if ever such 'tremendous' EVENTS changed the characters. (the korpsmen) (4S) World Background - Just like how DC-Comics portrayed and shows it in their comics. (3S)
Death Korp of Krieg (WH40K) | Justice League (DC-Comics)
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Additional Info (may contain spoilers) I have many readers that have pointed out that Hylric and Masha have committed heresy more than once. Which is not ideal when presenting the Death Korps guardsmen. However, I got a fix for that although readers would see it in later chapters like in Volume III. A Detailed Spoiler Since we got Masha and Hylric, written out to be deviant from the lore. I had the remanent of the 107th to compensate for that and make them true to the lore. P.S - I do what I can to satisfy the readers, mostly because I also want my FF to be somewhat satisfying and entertaining to read. Y'know?