Review Detail of MitralValve in The misadventures of the Pathetic One

The riveting tribulations of "Keemster" in this epic of Cool_Destroyer_4171 is truely incessantly drivelling in both tone, structure and form. Although masterfully crafted, the dissonant nature of his free-flowing paragraphs is in stark juxtaposition to the true natural world of today - one of rigidity, orderliness and scientific pedantic exploration. This contrast exemplifies his lack of skill (skill issue) and, unfortunately, is quite cringe in comparison to brilliant other fan-fictions such as "The Three Musketeers", masterfully circlejerking the vintage nostalgic French Monarchy of 400 years yonder.