The riveting tribulations of "Keemster" in this epic of Cool_Destroyer_4171 is truely incessantly drivelling in both tone, structure and form. Although masterfully crafted, the dissonant nature of his free-flowing paragraphs is in stark juxtaposition to the true natural world of today - one of rigidity, orderliness and scientific pedantic exploration. This contrast exemplifies his lack of skill (skill issue) and, unfortunately, is quite cringe in comparison to brilliant other fan-fictions such as "The Three Musketeers", masterfully circlejerking the vintage nostalgic French Monarchy of 400 years yonder.

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Skill Issue

The anonymisation of "King" withholds the name of Keemster, heightening expectation of his ultimate trials and tribulations. The "myth" of "generations to come" is also non-revelatory in nature, again building a sense of anguish in the reader, as one is implored to find this "myth". Moreover, the deftly personified "merciless waves of time" of an abstract being is reflective of the relentless battering that Keemster shall withstand against such trials. The "Hellands" is an allusion to the biblical epic of God and his war against Evil. It portrays Keemster as a staunch opponent, resilient in every charge and attack that his tribe faces.

The "thrive" is parasitic in nature, suggesting Keemster's permeation through daily life in the tribal lifestyle of his homeland. The parasitic nature emblazon him as the ultimate god.

The supernatural theme of "spirit" and ghost and "soul" are of the semantic field of the supernatural, suggesting Keemster's otherworldly powers permeating through the world, further strengthening his legacy. It also ties him to otherworldly biblical figures, such as Jesus - aptly evoking his legacy and power. The holy trinity of "Father", Jesus and God are a masterful reference contrasting the theme of death with subtle implications of heaven.

Personification of "Death", the abstract figure of humanity's ultimate challenge, is instead portrayed as his relief, his "ease", conveying Keemar's powerful and legendary legacy.

Tricolon crescendo, for dramatic effect in emphasising such eloquent qualities of such a wonderful figure such as "King Adriano Keemar," with such a word as "father" powerfully suggesting the fact that a father is ironically equal to the "Lord" and "Warrior," creating a dissonant tone. The word "father" also ironically conveys the absence of "father" that the reader has for being on webnovel.com.

short, blunt sentence of "here lies King Adriano Keemar" is evocative of mystery, hooking the reader, enticing one to continue reading.