Review Detail of GifflarGod in The Dawn of the New World

It's a great story and the world building is amazing. My problem is: 1. There is so much things happening at the same time. Seems Like the mc will never get good rest... he is always in danger.. It feels a bit stressful even for the reader. 2. Suddendly the mc is jumped from the 1st to 9th stage and the only struggle is THe breakthrough in major realms.. and that's ok but you ShoUld'Ve focused more at the progress between minor stages. Review made at chapter 240