Review Detail of shinigami8671 in The Dawn of the New World
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Hi everyone, DNW's author here. Im sure many of you would be wondering how a novel has so many chapters and no reviews or comments, and that's because it had to be moved here after licensing. You can find the original here with most of the initial free chapters and all comments and reviews. https:// w w w .webnovel.com/book/the-dawn-of-the-new-world_11726558706492805
The Dawn of the New World
Shinigami8671
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Ok I take my words back, this novel is not so shitty anymore with the mystery, but the progress is really to slow, why spend time on talking and stuff, and I know you got used writing like this, but its really long and unnecessary, straight to the point Shinigami. Him looking so weak and pitiful and the way it looks like he have no hope invokes my ire, its disgusting. I have to skim through the chapters but really read it, honestly I must say, other aspects of the novel is good but it's inconsistent and slow. He reached the Saint Realm in the one of his lifetimes and live through it and yes it help him greatly, but I don't like how he just shoved it away and didn't bother with it, if he learned the sword skill that he used in his life in Luna Empire "Nine Steps" he could have been more powerful And honestly, although the mc is getting more powerful he is loosing awareness and is often impulsive. I don't know how long you are gonna ignore his weaknesses and I always noticed that many of the weakness which could greatly affect him now and the future is being ignored and not dealt with, he was supposed to be a perfect creature. Honestly there is no other plots here aside from him powering up and fight and so on, its just bland. It leaves a bad taste in the mouth ya know. I see the effort you're putting in this novel, yes, but here is you major flaw : • You write long chapters but it doesn't emphasize the details. • You focus on your mysteries and how they connect but obviously it is inconsistent, although most major parts connect, the minor details gets shuffed out.
Not really, no. It's kind of difficult to answer without spoiling it but although there will be different partners, a harem (at least 3 women make constitute a harem) is not planned as of yet.
Nikhil_Chand:is this a harem? doesnt seem like it but this is an apocalypse novel so i thought i should ask
shinigami8671:Not really, no. It's kind of difficult to answer without spoiling it but although there will be different partners, a harem (at least 3 women make constitute a harem) is not planned as of yet.
Nikhil_Chand:its 560 chapters already and author says it is not planned as of yet :P
WN only allows exclusive partners to add tags, which i am not, so cannot add them normally. But if u go the link where the old novel is, u can see the tags there.
MrFalan:need tags
shinigami8671:WN only allows exclusive partners to add tags, which i am not, so cannot add them normally. But if u go the link where the old novel is, u can see the tags there.
Either unpartnered ones or fully exclusive partners could add them, which is why the older version under my account has them (since it was unpartnered). But this one is partially exclusive and I still have the full rights to the novel, so WN won't allow me even the most basic functions like adding tags or EVEN editing the synopsis.
Knights_Errant:I thought everyone could add tags wtf
1. Discord is: shinigami8671#1944 2. Patreon is: https:// w w w .patreon.com/shinigami8671 I'm almost always on discord. Haven't used patreon in years since creating it. Just feels weird lol. 3. Glad to hear you're liking the story. The main reason I don't work with WN (even though I got contract offers twice before)is because they are too overbearing. If your novel isn't in the top 10 rankings already, the contract conditions are absolutely horrible. For me personally, they asked me to sign over FULL rights to this novel, EVERY OTHER piece I would write in the future, and anything else I could come up with. Also, they wanted creative control over the novel and I would have to first confirm every single chapter with THEM before posting it. If I had accepted, I would have been their slave, unless I wanted to throw the novel away for good. 4. I want the novel to be as realistic as possible when it comes to relationships and world-building, and harems are not realistic at ALL unless the MC is a tyrant or a king or something. No one wants to see their loved ones being with someone else, regardless of gender. This weird fantasy that a normal girl would be okay with you having multiple females partners is what makes most novels unreadable for me.
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shinigami8671:1. Discord is: shinigami8671#1944 2. Patreon is: https:// w w w .patreon.com/shinigami8671 I'm almost always on discord. Haven't used patreon in years since creating it. Just feels weird lol. 3. Glad to hear you're liking the story. The main reason I don't work with WN (even though I got contract offers twice before)is because they are too overbearing. If your novel isn't in the top 10 rankings already, the contract conditions are absolutely horrible. For me personally, they asked me to sign over FULL rights to this novel, EVERY OTHER piece I would write in the future, and anything else I could come up with. Also, they wanted creative control over the novel and I would have to first confirm every single chapter with THEM before posting it. If I had accepted, I would have been their slave, unless I wanted to throw the novel away for good. 4. I want the novel to be as realistic as possible when it comes to relationships and world-building, and harems are not realistic at ALL unless the MC is a tyrant or a king or something. No one wants to see their loved ones being with someone else, regardless of gender. This weird fantasy that a normal girl would be okay with you having multiple females partners is what makes most novels unreadable for me.
lucasfischer:Oi, onde está essas notas do autor? pra achar a imagens e tal.
Ibuprofen:dope, harems are absolute ass and plague so many potentially good novels 😪 Apocalyptic ones bearing most of that cringe fest, all the dudes who get swamp ass over having harems are even worse, they will swear on there ma's life that harems are good and realistic! Ptui! i spit on them.
