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Daoist_BreakSky

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2021-06-28 JoinedUnited States
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky1mth
    Commented

    I think author might just be stupid but this is actually the best thing to do. Too much attachment will hinder his path as a reincarnator, he will go to many worlds and must remain unfettered.

    "I want them to pay with blood!"
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    I Have Awakened The Deduction System
    Eastern · Another Chance At Being Human
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky1mth
    Replied to Sabon

    One of the nine sons of the Ancestral Dragon. Born with the sin of gluttony, it has the ability to devour almost anything It looks like a lion with a dragon head and dragon features.

    "Taotie's descendant?!"
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    Mythical Era: My Electric Eel Clone Can Evolve Infinitely
    Eastern · I Have A Dragon Pen
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky1mth
    Posted

    Ya know I shouldn't have expected from this novel. I though the author would be different but he is just like those profiteers who milks their novel dry. Update I'm in chapter 1606 and nothing change, he is still the same mortal who has no control over his powers or wherever they are from. Felix always manages to come out as a disappointment. Ya know author I wouldn't have read this if your concept wasn't different. Its like using illegal drugs, ya know its bad for most of your days but atleast it gives you the pleasure sometimes. No offense but the story development is really bad. One of your concept is control over his powers but I see no development. Heck I even doubt if the universal scriptures are theirs, all of Felix's powers are borrowed. And you downgraded him by making him stupid, out of all times that Felix use his very bright mind he didn't realize that Lilith was after his core, oh right he did but guess what he still gave permission to Lilith. I doubt Asna still has control over her core. As for Felix, did he even have control in the first place. It is just plain stupid and bullshit, this story just hecking repeats its plot every single time. Ya know there's nothing even new anymore. Its's just plain, bland. Why must you repeat the tragedies again and again. What are you trying to make it realistic ha~h ha~h?. I hope you'll keep making those excuses so you won't have to continue the book at all.

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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky2mth
    Commented

    Hospitality, but dark

    'Hm Hm, as I thought, my expertise in hospitalizing someone for more than a year is still there.'
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    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky2mth
    Commented

    I understand you Author, I often missed some words when I write an essay but I do proofread it though.

    However, when his eyes fell wall, he realized that the power behind his spell was a lot weaker the Elara's spell.
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    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky3mth
    Posted

    i wouldn't speak much but this novels really got into my nerves . it is very confusing. the power levels, time skips to mysteries it was all confusing. the first 1 to 1,500 chapters was great but from 1600 to the last chapter it all went downhill, timeskip so his enemies could have outrageous power ups, he became a god before his sleep and when he woke up his enemies were literally god slayers. and even the ancestor dragon ray talen got his memory changed so he became a major enemy of Quinn

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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
    Posted

    Writing Quality : I must say it was quite good on the first few chapters but no, grammar, spelling, it was all bad. Your way of writing is also very chaotic. You keep changing perspective per perspective, leave plots hanging, you leave to much information which sometimes becomes redundant. You need to bring this all together.Story Development : It was very good for you make Moku your mc with it based on your synopsis, but you made a bad move, you change thr main characters perspective to another. And also you cant't justify you word of making in as record of the orc civilization because halfway through the novel you change perspective to human development, history and all that, which give me irked. Its not even story anymore, its a book of description. The later chapters focus more on information dumps which Is very unlikable. Character Design : I dont't even know what to say, abandoning first main character perspective and just leaving it on the plot armour disgust me, I hate it. Authors like you are incompetent.Updating Stability : No CommentWorld Background : Clear and unclear at the same time. You give too much details but not description, you're writing is more of whats going on, not what it is or whatever it was.REMARKS: Anyway you probably fattened your chapters because money, idk what to say. But your writing needs more improvmement. If this is your first book then congrats, your grammar and english might not be much but atleast you bring a world for us readers not like those out-of-spite novels. I wish you good luck in your next book. And if you want to be a great writer, webnobel might not be for you, money shackles the mind Author. Thankyou.

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    The Record of Orc Civilization
    Fantasy · BugatiCatForm
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
    Commented

    oh come on you guys know whats happening, he is going to turn her into a she-orc.

    "Your name is Nezena! You are a preacher! and your job is to spread my religion, the religion of The One!" Sperm spurted profusely and wet all parts of Nezena's uterus which had been destroyed and damaged.
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    The Record of Orc Civilization
    Fantasy · BugatiCatForm
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    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
    Commented
    They were scared and hugged each other, they thought Moku was using forbidden magic to treat his infertility.
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    The Record of Orc Civilization
    Fantasy · BugatiCatForm
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
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    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    The Record of Orc Civilization
    Fantasy · BugatiCatForm
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
    Replied to Haplo484

    But your statement wouldn't be valid because of the authors stupidity, so yeah.

    He also had a robot dog, Xiaotian, who would disguise itself as a stone that would roll around the planet as it collects useful resources.
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    People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon
    Sci-fi · Silver Lining
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
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    oh I forgot about the rover

    He also had a robot dog, Xiaotian, who would disguise itself as a stone that would roll around the planet as it collects useful resources.
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    People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon
    Sci-fi · Silver Lining
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
    Replied to 7amdxd

    I forgot hehe

    Someone had once calculated. The improvement brought about by eating a Five-Colored Spirit Tail Sparrow was equivalent to 300 Heavenly Cycles! It was equivalent to fifteen days of cultivation for an ordinary person.
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    I Maximize My Item-dropping Rate
    Eastern · Three Questions
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
    Replied to Daoist_BreakSky

    provided anything*

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    Ace Of Terrans
    Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky5mth
    Posted

    Honestly I find myself having a hard time reading this, the writing, its rubbish, its like machine translated, maybe it is. And also like fuck, its a fucking disappointment because him being a cultivator in his past life hardly provided that is of great relevance, I cant't connect the mc to a nigh-deity cultivator. This novel is shit no offense.

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    Ace Of Terrans
    Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky6mth
    Replied to Haplo484

    The moon is on a tidal lock with earth which means the bright side forever faces the Earth. He is on the dark side of the moon, so yeah thank me later.

    He also had a robot dog, Xiaotian, who would disguise itself as a stone that would roll around the planet as it collects useful resources.
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    People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon
    Sci-fi · Silver Lining
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky6mth
    Posted

    At first it was good but then uhh, the writing quality and story got so bad that I don't even know what to say. MC is a hypocrite. He doesn't even make use of his powers properly, he is always on the verge of death and when he wakes up, the first thought in his mind is Who am I?, What am I?, Where am I?. He is a fucking wizard, adept at magic and spiritual power but he always forgets who he was, the "Who am I?" plot probably repeated 5 times he nearly, the author cant't even think of something good or different. SUPER SUPER BAD, the ratings are good but they are lies. I DONT RECOMMEND THIS

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    I created Magic!
    Fantasy · Ghost_Worker
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky6mth
    Replied to Pru_Bear1

    Seat means lord or sometimes a higher being, Seat in these novel usually coincides with authority

    "warn these ants to cease their incessant behaviour or this seat shall not be kind!" After hearing this he realised the voice was most likely coming from the Tantibus.
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    I created Magic!
    Fantasy · Ghost_Worker
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky6mth
    Replied to Oladebo_Olamide

    After the fall of the old rules 327 years ago, the new rule system was built using extraordinary power as its foundation and that is the power of the beastmaster.

    A D-level talent was considered rather mediocre among Beastmasters, but becoming a Beastmaster was a hundred times better than being ordinary.
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    Simplified Beast Evolution Path
    Fantasy · Pokemon Zhu Zi
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  • Daoist_BreakSky
    Daoist_BreakSky6mth
    Commented

    River Sword Intent

    'Remember what it felt like.' Silas thought while remembering how his sword moved with the flow of his body, almost like he was the water and it was the river.
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    Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
    Fantasy · Animosity
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