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Apns444
Apns444Lv122yrApns444

Unreadable. The first and biggest issue with the book is the broken english. Multitude of gramatical and logical errors in sentences. To top it off, the dialogues seem like they were written by an AI - robotic, lacking emotions, plastic/fake. Same goes for the narrator. The story is your standard romance premise. Can't say anything about stability of updates, since it's already completed. It desperately needs proofreader and editor.

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The Doctor and The CEO

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Reyram
ReyramAuthorReyram

thanks for your comments. As this my first book, I had just wrote as I had felt, just wrote what I want to narrate. May be this book is not upto your expectations. When I look back into this book, and compare to my other books I can find the improvement in my language. Thanks once again for your sincere reviews. By the way I stopped writing books.

MorningStar00
MorningStar00Lv4MorningStar00

i need sister back of from my man chapters when u gonna release them

Reyram:thanks for your comments. As this my first book, I had just wrote as I had felt, just wrote what I want to narrate. May be this book is not upto your expectations. When I look back into this book, and compare to my other books I can find the improvement in my language. Thanks once again for your sincere reviews. By the way I stopped writing books.
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Hi dear, sorry to inform you that our author is not with us anymore. Thank you for supporting her.

MorningStar00:i need sister back of from my man chapters when u gonna release them
MorningStar00
MorningStar00Lv4MorningStar00

how u know?

Seo_cccc:Hi dear, sorry to inform you that our author is not with us anymore. Thank you for supporting her.
patitolucas74
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????

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Cris_pan
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why is that?

Seo_cccc:Hi dear, sorry to inform you that our author is not with us anymore. Thank you for supporting her.