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Linus_3489
Linus_3489Lv12yrLinus_3489

I thought the story will be very cool because its about a dragon which i think is really cool and amazing. That he can camouflage is awsome too and its good that his power gets reduced as he is in his human form. That was the good part till chapter 17 so far. But now to my not so overly good rating. And its about his bonding system which makes no sense at all and i dont like the interaction between himeself and that dimwit Ethan. In this interaction i think there is missing a charakteristic which i think is the best of a dragon the arrogance and being proud but well not every one think of a dragon as i do. And second of all a bonding system which does no sense to me as the system says its a manifastion of his power but why can he bond whitout even giving his consent because that leads me to think he isnt even in controll over his own power. Another thing i dont like at all is that he can share his power a little bit which utterly disappoints me in some way. Like he needs to do everything and the other completly weeklings can just grow with him. Not to mention the weird way of interacting between those two.

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The Archaic Dragon Mage

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Angelina_Bennett
Angelina_BennettAuthorAngelina_Bennett

and I respect your opinion. I knew when I decided to write the story that not everyone would like it. he's human turned dragon so no he doesn't act like a dragon at first. Ethan is a mentally broken person. he trusted Wyatt, and that allowed them to bond. almost all bonding afterward is something Wyatt requests after setting his preferance in the system. if you don't like my writing then you do not have to read it, but I stand by my choices. this is how I want to storyline to progress, and how these characters grow alongside each other. I thought it was natural for a dragon to pull ahead and become stronger then his human companions. I also thought that as a human turned dragon it would take time for him to develope that natural arrogance.

Criknight
CriknightLv4Criknight

ok but what about their interaction, it's going fast toward romance when I see it 🤨🤨🤨🤨 or will it change to something else later?!?!

Angelina_Bennett:and I respect your opinion. I knew when I decided to write the story that not everyone would like it. he's human turned dragon so no he doesn't act like a dragon at first. Ethan is a mentally broken person. he trusted Wyatt, and that allowed them to bond. almost all bonding afterward is something Wyatt requests after setting his preferance in the system. if you don't like my writing then you do not have to read it, but I stand by my choices. this is how I want to storyline to progress, and how these characters grow alongside each other. I thought it was natural for a dragon to pull ahead and become stronger then his human companions. I also thought that as a human turned dragon it would take time for him to develope that natural arrogance.