Review Detail of Maxspell13 in Bewitched His Soul

My main issue here is the writing quality. I rated the writing quality a 3 out of 5 because of some unclear sentences and grammatical errors in the novel. I hope that the author can improve her writing skills in the future. Note: I may not be an expert in english but I can't help but feel bothered by some sentences/ paragraphs in the novel. It's okay if you don't use the punctuation , correctly as long as you use the correct punctuations like . and ? in some sentences. I suggest that you should double check your work to check if you need some adjustments. Some websites in the internet can also help in improving your writing skills (e.g. gr*****ly)