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The first person to do this was An Ju. She looked so exciting as she stepped forward that the other four shadow guards couldn't help but roll their eyes seeing this.- Maxspell131yrReplied to indang_pimex
How is she narrow minded?
She had suffered so much. Her child died before even coming to this world then why should she still try to please him. - Maxspell131yrReplied to Maxspell13
Please ignore the other most. Thank you
And if she walked hand in hand with him forgetting everything then she would not be able to forgive herself. Her nights were still filled with the dreams for her child's blood. - Maxspell131yrReplied to indang_pimex
That's just my opinion so you don't have to agree. Just think about my reply carefully before you judge her for not moving forward. Thank you.
And if she walked hand in hand with him forgetting everything then she would not be able to forgive herself. Her nights were still filled with the dreams for her child's blood. - Maxspell131yrReplied to
So basically you're saying that by having another child can lessen her pain. Then what would happen if she looses another child? Should she try again? Should she take the risk and sacrifice her own health just for the sake of having a child whith her situation in the palace? The mental pain doesn't fade that easily unlike physical pain. It might be easy for you to say that because you aren't in her situation. This is the problem of most most people especially from those who are from Asia. This is what I don't get it when other people say that a couple must have a baby immediately after getting married (like, just chill people, it's not like you're God or the one providing for them) or have another child even after losing one. Like, didn't they think that the couple/woman doesn't want to have one yet since they/she just experienced something bad. The asian thing that I wrote earlier is really common in Asia as I have witnessed one myself here in my neighborhood and even in my own family. I told them the same thing but their opinion still doesn't change (like, they must mind their own business).
And if she walked hand in hand with him forgetting everything then she would not be able to forgive herself. Her nights were still filled with the dreams for her child's blood. - Maxspell131yrCommented
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Old Master Nan snorted. "If you're afraid of their reputation, I'll just simply told everyone that I'm recuperating here. Is that enough, Nan Shu Cheng?' - Maxspell131yrCommented
didn't
Evelyn froze for a second ,she had never heard him speak to her in such a tender tone .It was as if she was a spoiled child yet he did have the heart to scold her harshly .Seeing Evelyn was distracted Daniel took advantage of her situation and leaned closer to her such that there was only few inches gap between their lips. - Maxspell131yrCommented
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My main issue here is the writing quality. I rated the writing quality a 3 out of 5 because of some unclear sentences and grammatical errors in the novel. I hope that the author can improve her writing skills in the future. Note: I may not be an expert in english but I can't help but feel bothered by some sentences/ paragraphs in the novel. It's okay if you don't use the punctuation , correctly as long as you use the correct punctuations like . and ? in some sentences. I suggest that you should double check your work to check if you need some adjustments. Some websites in the internet can also help in improving your writing skills (e.g. gr*****ly)
- Maxspell131yrReplied to Maxspell13
add , before but
If he was alone then he just wore his shorts but since Evelyn was here he forced himself to wear a tshirt when he came out out he saw Evelyn was seated on the sofa and watching TV. - Maxspell131yrReplied to Maxspell13
remove then and add a . before when
If he was alone then he just wore his shorts but since Evelyn was here he forced himself to wear a tshirt when he came out out he saw Evelyn was seated on the sofa and watching TV.