Review Detail of Austen_mullennix in Fictional Chat Group - All-girls Only Edition

I like this a lot. My only issue is that it needs a lot of editing as a lot of the sentences make no sense as they are either missing words entirely or just severely jumbled up in some cases. currently I'm only on chapter 9 but I hope it changes later on. I cant say much about the frequency of updates as I only just discovered this story and have not caught up. I like the character design of the MC and somewhat of the world background (though I cant say much there either as I haven't read\seen much to judge it yet but from the little I have seen its good). The story development is okay so far, again cant say too much yet as I haven't read far enough yet but its also decent from what I can see.