Meh it not too bad the chapter are long but at the same time they are filled with useless info that nobody wants to know Overall not bad keep going Author
TetekGede
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LIKEDon't worry about it, it didn't annoy me much just thought I should mention it, you story is good keep going
TetekGede:Sorry about that useless info
Noname126:Don't worry about it, it didn't annoy me much just thought I should mention it, you story is good keep going
It would help for people like me, I'm used to chat group novels where worlds are visited and characters interact a lot, I gave up around chapter 22ish when mc was still in her original oc world without meeting anyone, this feels more like an original novel than a fanfic.
Onxio:This fic needs arcs for each world or a indicator that the mc is in a new world cause its all arc one and I know when arifureta there should've been an indicator regardless of how short the stay was
Ototsu_Yume:It would help for people like me, I'm used to chat group novels where worlds are visited and characters interact a lot, I gave up around chapter 22ish when mc was still in her original oc world without meeting anyone, this feels more like an original novel than a fanfic.
For indicator, I couldn't redo it since that will make the chapters order in a mess. Another reasons maybe because I used to write original novel than fanfic. Also, the plot is very slow so I'm sorry about that. I'm also used to write story in slow paced plot.
Ototsu_Yume:It would help for people like me, I'm used to chat group novels where worlds are visited and characters interact a lot, I gave up around chapter 22ish when mc was still in her original oc world without meeting anyone, this feels more like an original novel than a fanfic.