abandoned?

thanks for the chapter

also thanks for the chapter

ur finally back

it was a good while it lasted

so far so good keep it going ....... ...

Thanks as an Egyptian this strikes my non-existent pride from my country

Gonna give my unwanted opinion this fic isn't bad by any means but the oc kinda of boring not gonna lie no flaws and nothing really kinda of bland keep in mind the I only read 11 chapters so maybe it get better on but meh it too boring anyway 4/10 no offense to the author mary sue just isn't my cup of tea

sadge

Le goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

alright will do another one

I really don't understand how this is overshadowed in the top hundred fanfic when something like a scum dream made it like come on this is a true gem more people should read hope the best for the author

nice keep going ...........................

never said a thing about preference plus if you wann read futa and stuff like that you should just read lemons and if you say some people just like harem i will say that you can like whatever you want as long as it doesn't take 90% of the site and make plot non-existent in it as for the change is sexuality of the character it fine I am not into that myself but if u like that go ahead Just whenever they change gender of someone it always feels like all man bad expect me because i am a girl expect I was a man before but we don't talk about that because I am a girl now it feels very cheap and bad

The story is a bit slow paced but not boring it feels like the author is trying to actually write a character and a plot instead of the usual empty shell that only wants to smash that alone makes it get a high rating With that said I think that the plot is a bit too predictable but maybe that me reading too much fanfiction even if the plot is not the best out there i gotta give the author credit for trying something a bit different from the usual trash on this site With that said best of luck

I have not read the entire story but from the vibe i am getting this is going to be wish fulfillment where the mc just sticks with rin and bashes on everyone one else like they are a joke which is not the bad compared to harem but isn't that good either idk just feels kind of empty and had nothing special honestly would have preferred the mc being funny and weak af instead of this but whatever

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This is giving me the vibe of a generic pokemon harem so I have to ask is it a generic pokemon?

Thanks

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