Review Detail of Zeeshan_Haider_8466 in Pokemon: Master of tactics

This story is over all pretty good except from two major flaws. Idk if the writer is Chinese or he just reads way too many Chinese novels bcz the way of speech is too robotic and repetitive. If the author can add bit of a human touch it would be way better.( For example the way Scizor and cobalt used to argue in the 100s was too repetitive and the insults used were repeated continuously. It's used as comedic relief and that also pretty badly. Other than that the romance is cringy af. There's no such thing as love at first sight and I'm pretty disappointed that this novel went in that direction just for quicker 'lemon scenes'. Other than these there r some minor flaws that I can't bother to write rn but overall if the author takes care of these flaws that novel would be near purrrfect. [Ps: I dropped the novel at about 150th chapter so I don't know about the case of the last few chapters]