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Review Detail of GnawingJackal in Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)

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GnawingJackal
GnawingJackalLv53yrGnawingJackal

It's another bland SI story with the same usual problems. The MC uses the nebulous threat of the evil things the Big Bads of Marvel will get up to in the future to justify going around and stealing a whole bunch of super powers. The problem with that in terms of a good story-line is that bad luck never befalls this MC. This means that Cypher never has a challenging relationship, a threat to his life or any emotional hook at all to anything he does in the story. Add some bad luck and self-doubt.

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Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)

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GnawingJackal
GnawingJackalLv5GnawingJackal

Stealing powers isn't the problem. Having the main character of the story be nothing more than a training robot, however, is.

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I don't see why jis 'stealing' powers is a problem.
SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3SageOfSins

thàt what I'm talking about ... quit it or remake this Author .

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3

I don't see why jis 'stealing' powers is a problem.

DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

cuz he is hypocrite who tires to be in high moral ground 😕

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I don't see why jis 'stealing' powers is a problem.