As a reader, I feel like the beginning/introduction was very long, but at the same time, I liked how descriptive it was. The words used were ones that are eloquent but easy to understand. It really gives the story a smooth flow. The MC's perseverance and dedication are attractive. His Oath made in chapter 3 was very reasonable and realistic considering his circumstances. The story is in the eastern world, but all the interactions are very realistic and logical. I hope to see more.
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