Henry_Hyren
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Pros: The story is indeed good and enjoyable, I very much liked it. The characters have their own uniqueness which mixes well with the whole story. The only thing I can say for the opposite is that, indeed, the grammar is correct but it's a bit... rough? The sentences have too many pronouns or nouns. For example, the I's in every beginning of the sentences, but as the story goes on, it becomes better. I'm loving the book more and more, I hope you keep writing đ
Games are not my cup of tea, but this sure is! The first few chapters gives you the general idea of the author's capabilities in terms of writing and behold! She's a master. Everything's perfect, even the flow of the story and also the interactions. The character and plot advancements are also well made, I hope to see more
Ya'll be sleeping on this. The words and phrases used are very eloquent but easy to read. It's descriptive and enjoyable. Not to mention that the plot is something to look forward to. There's love, there's fighting, it's all a mystery until you decide to read it. Btw, It's completed too. *Wink Wink*
As a reader, I feel like the beginning/introduction was very long, but at the same time, I liked how descriptive it was. The words used were ones that are eloquent but easy to understand. It really gives the story a smooth flow. The MC's perseverance and dedication are attractive. His Oath made in chapter 3 was very reasonable and realistic considering his circumstances. The story is in the eastern world, but all the interactions are very realistic and logical. I hope to see more.