Review Detail of Brian70707 in Marvel: Starting from the Bottom

*OP* Funny considering he is beta level

Depth I can agree with. I started writing not long ago, so it's a given. As for the timeline. Only a few things are out of place for now... which is intentional. But you need comic knowledge to enjoy the timeline. If you have the comic knowledge... This timeline is far more simplified than any other comic one. I

Surprised you replied I don't have much comic knowledge If you ever decide to rewrite your story (most end up doing that, drives me nuts) Please have a non op mc and add other worlds into story Taken, John wick, fast and furious, transporter, equalizer, the raid, die hard, Similar to the super detective in fictional world Could have it mc is Tony starks twin brother but due to reincarnation and knowledge of marvel he is way more mature. Let's things run its corse for Tony and rescues him with his own avengers team of non powered but highly skilled individuals

Being Tony's twin it has added benifits, high iq, being billionaire, being able to use Tony's suits of armour, Could have him when a child meet Ms marvel just after her crash landing before shield get their. To advance local technology has her after building friendship bring him tech from other planets he can have Tony develop it only after he becomes iron man Universal translator Shielding generators Those space face masks Space ship

*John Wick* is a spoiler lmao. But Idk about other worlds

Have him train martial arts first from stick then at kun lun, meeting and informing future iron fist of sticks order Have him train a bit in mystic arts with ancient one that gives him ability to travel around world easier and quicker,

Easy way to merge them really Mc is sitting at the continental in New York after working with Frank Martin (Jason statham) who is finishing dropping a package of for Winston. As Frank leaves John wick is entering with his bloody shirt and dog. Frank is actually an alias that Deckard Shaw is using because he wants to live quietly for a while. To combine equalizer and John wick could have it they run into each other after end of what would be 1st film he meets Robert mccall at that cafe in first equalizer film, which could be part of the continental network Mccall says something like are you working again

Man. The fact that you say a beta is OP show that your knowledge of the story is really lacking. OK to put it into perspective. You know dark Phoenix from the film right? That girl can warp reality and recreate world. She is beyond-Omega. There's this guy who is So powerful he can manipulate reality. Let's say it like that. In comics. Thanos with the gauntlet isn't even in the top 20 or 50. That's just how ****ed up Marvel is. So in all that. You are calling this mc OP? Lol. 😅

When I say op Im comparing him to likes of spiderman He can read minds doesn't that mean he is able to do what xavier does but lower level

I'm comparing him to typical people mc would meet if this was comic Daredevil, spiderman,

only read minds, nothing else. Xavier has telepathy but MC only has mind reading

Cool

I find the mc in the. Marvel fan fiction super detective in fictional world has some depth. You might wish to read that It's created through the mcs daily life that is both described and explained intermittently

I do like that you gave wolverine a chance to be with his son Do you plan to create x23

Are you an idiot or you are just trying to be one. Mc is op, don't make me laugh even black widow could kill him as he is now. You should not post bs reviews when you clearly don't know anything about marvel.

op 🤣👍

This is Marvel where they're certain people who can manipulate reality, eat planets and destroy universes roam free so him being too 'OP' quickly is really not anything important

Honestly, this review is BS and this 'opinion' sounds like your fantasy book. C’mon man, this author wants to create a Marvel Fic, and you just had to talk like merging all those worlds would be easy for a new author. Even if he did merge, you know the 'depth' you talk about will be non-existent.

So this the famed illiterate, Hello! How are you doing? Could you understand English without Google translate?

I still don't understand why you're telling him how to write his own story? As far as I and most others are concerned the author has every right to do what he wants with his story. If he asks for suggestions then by all means give him some, but he's writing it the way he wants to. Not writing what other people think it should be like. Thank you for reading this and I'm sorry if this may offend you in anyway but I felt it needed to be said.