Review Detail of Everton_Mason in My Pick Up Artist System

The first few chapters are cool....however it's a little too forced into the 'comedy' part here, you have a mix of Dumb & Dumber being the mc and cousin, with Two and Half Men and The Big Bang Theory-style jokes who are a little far-fetched or more or less funny that need a fake laugh in the background, as well as having a lot of jokes with references to semi-unknown celebrities. Well that's my opinion when reading this, read and give your opinion too.