Unnecessary chapter, wrote a little drama with the story of the boy naruto, it's just garbage, being that it's not faithful to the story, everything has changed and it's not the mc, which leads me to think that the garbage will come from 'mc influenced by emotions of your self before waking up'. Amateur to the extreme.

ehehehe I feel like I've read this beginning hundreds of times.... wait... I really read it hundreds of times (-_-') ..... the bad thing about these fanfics is that they are so generic and copied, they all end up incomplete with less than 100 chapters, no one seems to take naruto seriously to make a good fanfic without the I want this plus this and that system.

what a bore huh, it's already boring these words after anime sentences like naruto - dattebayo or arinska from overlord, however it's one thing to be in japanese audio, now, written for westerners, it's just nonsense, it ruins the reading ...

it was obvious that there will always be a delay in the final moment... typical reader-bait plot, author treating the reader like a fish... I've seen many xinxias like this. You have to read until the end for a total romantic dishonor. Besides that this mc is pretty disgusting, if you analyze well, he won everything for free without effort, and still doesn't have much personality, despite being in the category of romances nominated for men, it's clearer a female domination with a dubious emaciated mc .

because the author has no ideas of his own... this book is a compilation of clichés that he copies from other books that he copied from other books.. in short, no one is original on this site....

cliché of the cliché.... I've been reading novels for 8 years and this is the most common one, as people insist on copying authors rather than making their own success. The naive mc who is naive and dies.... young naive of engagement body.... engagement goal... catchphrase promising to get revenge. ... ''How innovative I have never seen this before'' irony.

you didn't read what I wrote, or are you pretending to be silly?, I clearly explained that he writes separate scenes as if there was a line between them, that is, to flow and have a continuous reading that you understand all the parts as one, you would need to integrate them. If you don't understand that, go to the big stool.

I left other opinions here, but the more I read, the more generic and bad it becomes, besides having many ways to strengthen yourself and overcome battle power to fight with people of higher level, here there is a pointless thing of battle prowess that has no basis, besides, a disgusting thing is that the mc responds to provocations and acts arrogant because he was someone of heavenly level, but the only people who suffer are the people related to him, no one has a good ending or is free of humiliation and death relating to the mc.

the restaurant only has one table, right, even if all tables were full, they would soon choose the mc, an academy student, instead of another ...... this author is practically a total xinxia plagiarist. Not even a little bit of originality, at least a little.............

Also, never expect the mc to have a higher power, he is always under power than his current enemies. A very naughty technique this, used by authors to have the moment 'underestimating mc' 'slaps in the face', don't be fooled by its divine techniques and immortal base, much of it is just name and gets lost on the way. He is hailed as a fast cultivator, but makes up for lost time, never outruns enemies, is always 'above the extras' 'below the enemies'.

Bear in mind if you venture to read this novel, the author is lazy, uses the old Chinese novel formulas, and still abuses the use too much. Mc is a former cultivator at the height of power, but he reincarnates with a childish attitude and keeps bringing trouble to his poor clan. Junk plots, mc beats, beats and humiliates enemies, but leaves them alive for future attacks from their elders. Of course, let's not forget the terrible coincidences of always the mc is in the right place at the right time, or in the wrong place at the wrong time. ex: walking in the mountains, I stumbled on a spiritual fruit that was what I needed to pass the level and only serves my current cultivation... how lucky.... however, a young master decided to pass by in the same place and the same time, and wants to steal the mc... More importantly, like all cultivation novels, the mc will always rise from world to world, or plane to plane. This is nothing more than a reset, as he becomes weak again and follows the same footsteps and clichés as the previous world. Nothing changes, lazy Chinese writing. Little joke to cheer you up: China is so communist that even romance writers share their plots.

meh.... I have to say that this is the worst possible scenario for a book for me... MC loose who reincarnates and has a family, wants to live a normal life, clings to family, to the point of becoming their emotional anchor and weak point, which the authors exploit to the fullest through dramas, like this one now. Then he goes after power to save his weak points... and blah blah blah

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hahaha read 14 chapters only to find out the main character is not smart, he's just a system controlled idiot doing childish tricks, plotting and faking to get system points. Just like that novel of the dominator system, that the guy has to act dominating in front of people to earn points, then he loses the notion of everything around him, because he only knows how to act dominating all the time.

Go figure.... either Chinese culture is rubbish in that sense, or authors like to glamorize brothels and prostitution, it looks like a gala event or an oscar hahaha, look at it from the point of view, young masters, princes, and people influential people, who have the power and money to have slaves, servants, concubines and wives, because they would be showing up in a brothel and ruining their reputation, to have relationships with women who have and will have relationships with hundreds or thousands of men. This glamorization is meaningless.

another one of those cliches of hiding one's cultivation, with an unfounded reason not to draw attention. Then the authors get annoyed when they say it's just a cliche copy of the thousands of novels before this one.

Unfortunately it is more of a generic oriental work.... even the addition of system, strong family in which the mc is reincarnated, and a forced marriage to the mc, failed to mask the basic pattern of oriental works of years and years. This type of work has already saturated enough, even the humor they try to do is saturated and demotivating to read. As always, the manufacture of novels of this type may even change the packaging, but the content will always be that, until they learn to make something for themselves without copying models.

the original novel is very, very good, still in progress, the plot and cultivation elements are diverse in the original work, the problem I cited was, that i read qiye, known as crow, is the main mc, all powerful fear for literally millions of years, however the author here will write about the son of mi ren who is an immortal emperor, who was a student of li qye. It will be difficult for me to change or leave the original mc li quye in the background and focus on his student's son. For you to understand more, just reading the original work, I highly recommend the original.

bad grammar, shameless copy of the elements of against the gods: deep veins, elements by crystals, wise god/evil god, legacy hahaha what a brazen. In addition to the author being useless enough to create fake profiles and review the book itself over and over again.

it's a wish fulfillment, don't expect a script or plot.... it could even be good to spend time reading, but the writing work is terrible, very robotic, without fluid, like quick letters in medicine commercials, and the 'author', if you can call it that, assembles his chapters like a patchwork quilt, the chapter doesn't flow, it's all shredded, so much so that he separates everything by a line, because he can't make a work of 1 integrated chapter . So maybe you shouldn't waste your time, try about 10 chapters to see for yourself.