Review Detail of Shona_Gillard in Reincarnation From Villainess to Princess: Journey to Being Empress
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I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far. I feel like the characters are well developed, and that it has a good mix of humor and mystery. I know the author mentioned that English is not a first language, but you can hardly notice. If I were to be critical, then I would say that the only thing that feels a little on the back burner is the world building. I feel like that the mix of technology added to the constant conquest could possibly use more time to flesh out. But on the whole, it doesn't distract me from the story much.
Reincarnation From Villainess to Princess: Journey to Being Empress
sugarcoatqueenx
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Hello! I cannot thank you enough for giving my story a chance. Thank you so much for your thoughts and honesty. I really appreciate it as I would now know what to work on more. When I started this story, I initially placed most of the world building details in the latter parts (which is very soon in the current chapters) because I thought it would be off-putting if I put that as the central part of the first chapters. I for myself would not appreciate an information overload đ As for the mixed genres of historical, fantasy, mystery, and dystopia--technology in a somewhat historical setting?--honestly, I don't have a good enough reason why I made it like that đ It came out like this in my head and I decided to write it down. I was actually worried about it at first because I might not be able to pull it off đ Perhaps it will make more sense when the chapters about the current state of the world gets explored. I am also working on the story guide link (http://tiny.cc/jttcpics) to help readers get more of a grasp on how the world in this story is. I'm trying to get the some issues resolved first so it would not topple on top of the other. Anyway, I'm sorry for the lengthy reply đ I hope you stay tuned until the end. Again, thank you so much! â¨
Hey there! I totally get not wanting to front load with exposition. It's always hard trying to find that balance! And I like where things have been going, so I'm excited to see how it all comes together. Mixing genres and historical eras can be really fun, which is something I do like about this story, so keep up the good work :)
sugarcoatqueenx:Hello! I cannot thank you enough for giving my story a chance. Thank you so much for your thoughts and honesty. I really appreciate it as I would now know what to work on more. When I started this story, I initially placed most of the world building details in the latter parts (which is very soon in the current chapters) because I thought it would be off-putting if I put that as the central part of the first chapters. I for myself would not appreciate an information overload đ As for the mixed genres of historical, fantasy, mystery, and dystopia--technology in a somewhat historical setting?--honestly, I don't have a good enough reason why I made it like that đ It came out like this in my head and I decided to write it down. I was actually worried about it at first because I might not be able to pull it off đ Perhaps it will make more sense when the chapters about the current state of the world gets explored. I am also working on the story guide link (http://tiny.cc/jttcpics) to help readers get more of a grasp on how the world in this story is. I'm trying to get the some issues resolved first so it would not topple on top of the other. Anyway, I'm sorry for the lengthy reply đ I hope you stay tuned until the end. Again, thank you so much! â¨