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Review Detail of Zukio in Supremacy Games

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Zukio
ZukioLv142yrZukio

Overall the premise is actually the only good thing. There is a lot of potential in it but the author absolutely ruined it. if you are considering to read this story so not waste your time I less you have nothing better to do and want to have a pretty bad experience. first of all, the beginning is very long and honestly quite boring. Yes, the setting has to be introduced and the system but many authors have managed to do this in a better way. Secondly, the MC is the only character that can be called a character In this book. every other character is shallow and incredibly cliche. Thirdly, the language is quite awful, grammar is not checked and a lot of bad sentence structures and sometimes mistakes. Finally, the author is quite sexist in the writing (*who am I kidding this is Webnovel) and is rather mysagonistic when it comes to describing the female protagonists (* haha but there arent any only girls the author adds to a weird harem). In addition the dialogue is horrible and unrealistic and I wonder if the author ever interacts with women. For 4.8 stars this story is incredibly underwhelming. The chapters are poorly written and there are a lot of plot holes but that is not the worst. the worst is the blatant sexism and disregard for women and the shallow conversations.

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Supremacy Games

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Lahar_Archmage
Lahar_ArchmageLv10Lahar_Archmage

Novel is quite good and looking at your review score you simply got offended by something inside it and decided to go full hate mode. Alternative universe/sci-fi theme means that not everything should be like real world and people can behave unlike what you think is normal. That doesn't mean it makes story worse, but in my opinion better. Can you post examples of plot holes? I'm pretty sensitive to them and i do not get that feeling from Supremacy Games.

Matthew_Popescu
Matthew_PopescuLv1Matthew_Popescu

did I read the same novel as u

Zukio
ZukioLv14Zukio

Look, like I said the premise is not bad. However, the author overly sexualizes every female character (Asna in the consciousness) or also when the cousins first see a movie in UVR, like excuse me. How do you not see the underlying sexist tone of the book? But Felix also literally rapes the girl Nora at around chapter 100. TBf that is the worst thing a out the book, however, things like the bad dialogue make it worse. Like sure the author can build suspense, however, the novel is honestly very underwhelming for 4.8 stars. I would highly recommend looking at the Iron Prince as an actually good example for a sci fi fantasy novel where both the storyline and dialogue is realistic and perfectly executed.

Matthew_Popescu:did I read the same novel as u