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Lahar_Archmage

Lahar_Archmage

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fantasy, martial arts/magic and mature isekai novel reader

2021-05-10 JoinedPoland
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Commented

    Sadly there was no chapters last days and i got left at Momo cliffhanger :(

    Ch 579 Dealing With Momo.
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Commented

    Author, currently there are whole brain implants that create something like AI, but with biological brain. They block & create signals that are limited to certain database of thoughts thus allowing to read mind and semi-control subject (for example inserting messages, blocking short memory and forcing suggestions to get semi-control, etc.), but that result in lower brain capability & a lot of negative effects. It has been done on animals and in darkness probably on humans, so... sci-fi should cover this topic and i think this paragraph creates plot hole.

    Shepherd must think that they have cornered Matt. However, there is a major flaw in their data. How could they possibly guess that he was an ever-evolving parasite? It was only a matter of time until Alexis could ignore this silly implantation. And Matt didn't even need to hide it from her. Science couldn't read minds or intercept and read brain waves yet.
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    Imposter System
    Sci-fi · Pill_Guy
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Posted

    Well written story, good character design and world background. I would rate it 5/5 only if updates would be more frequent. So far there is so little written and yet chapters get hidden behind privilege :/ It would be okay if we get at least one chapter per day, but we do not.

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    Imposter System
    Sci-fi · Pill_Guy
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Replied to MystiGlacier06

    +1, you just totally destroyed author :D There is some truth about that because his main novel has massive plot holes problems everywhere later in story.

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    My Cultivation System
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Posted

    Great novel, not so good start, but gets better really fast. The major problem i can currently see is that novel is updated very slowly :( I hope chapters will be longer or frequency of updates increase.

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    Vampire Reborn
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Commented

    Looks good, can't wait for what trouble first "witcher" news create in galaxy :)

    Ch 458 Concocting Rejuvenation Potion!
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Replied to Rhudee

    Yeah, MC is almost at "brick" level. Check later chapters where plot holes appear and instead getting fixed they just get bigger. I've read over 700 chapters and there is more of them making story broken. For example he got rank 4 herb to lvl up that can be eat directly, but author totally forgot about it and MC waits to gather one more energy orb so he can get as fast as possible to general realm, but he can do it anytime...

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    New Age Of Summoners
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Replied to vinayraj

    there is nowhere in story info that he can't use long bow dao, it would be better if you could fix this mistake in previous chapters because it cause confusion :/

         Congratulations to the host for successfully learning three weapon daos. A new title is unlocked.
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    New Age Of Summoners
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Replied to DoubleCoN

    plot hole ate bow dao, i wonder why author do not fix chapters with missing things or grammar mistakes that i often found.

    Currently, Ajax already has two weapon dao, namely, the sword dao and the spear dao. Moreover, both of them have already reached grade 3.
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    New Age Of Summoners
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Replied to Sesshomaru_

    Does MC improve or he is "brick" whole story? I have it on my next to read list and i really hate when author makes stupid MC for no reason. Like you said it makes people hate whole novel even if it has good writing :/

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    My Cultivation System
    Fantasy · vinayraj
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Replied to Zukio

    Novel is quite good and looking at your review score you simply got offended by something inside it and decided to go full hate mode. Alternative universe/sci-fi theme means that not everything should be like real world and people can behave unlike what you think is normal. That doesn't mean it makes story worse, but in my opinion better. Can you post examples of plot holes? I'm pretty sensitive to them and i do not get that feeling from Supremacy Games.

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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Posted

    One of the best web novels that exist, i gladly rate it with max score. Awesome world background building, good character design where you feel everyone is real as much as possible and evolving story development. This is a that kind of novel where you spam refresh button for new chapter to appear everyday :D

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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • Lahar_Archmage
    Lahar_Archmage2yr
    Posted

    Story well written, at start a bit too slow, but after some chapters when MC goes to the first city it gets better. Chapters are short and i really wish i could read longer ones, but novel has frequent updates so it is well balanced. World is huge and details about everything are slowly revealed in story - no problem here. Character design is good, but not perfect. I feel like too much people are friendly to MC instead trying some plot to steal his wealth. Overall story is above average and deserve high rating that is why i rated it 4,8/5. I read little above 100 chapters on other site while writing this review without mentioning any spoilers. After feeling familiarity to the Reverend Insanity in this story i decided to register here and help author :)

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    Darius Supreme
    Fantasy · Kotario
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