Lahar_Archmage
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Author, currently there are whole brain implants that create something like AI, but with biological brain. They block & create signals that are limited to certain database of thoughts thus allowing to read mind and semi-control subject (for example inserting messages, blocking short memory and forcing suggestions to get semi-control, etc.), but that result in lower brain capability & a lot of negative effects. It has been done on animals and in darkness probably on humans, so... sci-fi should cover this topic and i think this paragraph creates plot hole.
Yeah, MC is almost at "brick" level. Check later chapters where plot holes appear and instead getting fixed they just get bigger. I've read over 700 chapters and there is more of them making story broken. For example he got rank 4 herb to lvl up that can be eat directly, but author totally forgot about it and MC waits to gather one more energy orb so he can get as fast as possible to general realm, but he can do it anytime...
there is nowhere in story info that he can't use long bow dao, it would be better if you could fix this mistake in previous chapters because it cause confusion :/
plot hole ate bow dao, i wonder why author do not fix chapters with missing things or grammar mistakes that i often found.
Novel is quite good and looking at your review score you simply got offended by something inside it and decided to go full hate mode. Alternative universe/sci-fi theme means that not everything should be like real world and people can behave unlike what you think is normal. That doesn't mean it makes story worse, but in my opinion better. Can you post examples of plot holes? I'm pretty sensitive to them and i do not get that feeling from Supremacy Games.
One of the best web novels that exist, i gladly rate it with max score. Awesome world background building, good character design where you feel everyone is real as much as possible and evolving story development. This is a that kind of novel where you spam refresh button for new chapter to appear everyday :D
Story well written, at start a bit too slow, but after some chapters when MC goes to the first city it gets better. Chapters are short and i really wish i could read longer ones, but novel has frequent updates so it is well balanced. World is huge and details about everything are slowly revealed in story - no problem here. Character design is good, but not perfect. I feel like too much people are friendly to MC instead trying some plot to steal his wealth. Overall story is above average and deserve high rating that is why i rated it 4,8/5. I read little above 100 chapters on other site while writing this review without mentioning any spoilers. After feeling familiarity to the Reverend Insanity in this story i decided to register here and help author :)