So I read the storyline and it hooked me in. It was intriguing and so was the starting of the first chapter. I do believe there's more improvisation needed in terms of some of the details and sentences. But the story is certainly intriguing and worth a shot. Good job author! Keep it up and keep grinding 💯💪 Keep updating ☺️
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LIKELami274:Thank you so much!! That means a lot! I will try to improve it as much as I can ♥️😌