Review Detail of amaturewriter in In DC Universe with my Wishes (Rewriting in the process)

First of all... I made it look like this, so that he would have his reason on why he chose those wishes... The MC hates her obviously... the MC also noticed that she has her reasons but he still decided to not hear it, and never accepts it... I actually planned to make the MC beat her, but then I thought that it would not be suitable for his personality that I'm planning to make... This also doesn't mean that he will not hit a woman just because they're woman! Lol, but still your choice... I won't delete this review because you were the first, just want to let you know that my focus was never in the "grilfriend that betrayed him" so yeah... Peace!

dude...hello....I think MC should've hit her,,,or atleast not protected her...I mean he lost his mom, was broke, and then finds out the love of his life cheated on him?...damn man, this dude would have had his entire personality changed..AND him protecting her was retarded,,,that was stupid....that situation isnt about personality..what pride? he dosnt accept her reasons? big deal....he protected her when some called her a slut,,I mean, she was a slut no?...that was stupid,,,,and that made me drop...I will say that first 2 chps were interesting, no doubt but the third,,,nah,,,I hate stupid ****, and stupid MC. **: re-reading what I've wrote, it sounds rude, I apologize, but I will still stand by what I've said

also, i feel bad ur first review was mine, sorry if means anything. if it wast for c3, i would've supported this cause I do like ur idea

No, I'm actually fine with it. I thank you for your honest review... but the thing that I want to say at that part was that he protects her to return the favor for making him realize how foolish he had become... Like I said in the previous chapters, I will find a way to make him change his personality... this was actually the start of it. But still I thank you for at least trying my fanfic man! Peace!

Thx for the warning I hate ntr with a passion so this would have ruined my night.

i also hate ntr but i will give the author a chance after all i hope he can return to his world to kill his girlfriend's parents and the guy who raped her

no one raped her. And her parents werent really involved in anything..I think u are reading wrong story.

homie from what i read they sold it for a week Man i think the author changed the chapter try to read agr

nope...u talking some weird **** my dude...no one sold anything,, there was no rape, nothing,,,did u read the bk?

friend are you reading right?

and two options either the author changed the chapter or I somehow know that I smoked a lot based

friend I went to see now it was my mistake and in chapter 5 that explains what happened kkkkk it was bad

cool

no i've dropped this after reading C4

I recommend that you read chapter 5 which explains everything

author has changed certain things it seems...and reading everything, I hate it even more [especially the reason for chick]

-_-

The author keeps trying to 'explain' but doesn't matter the reason. She is a slut and the MC should let her die. btw dropped

loose American you in, aki in south america betrayal is a bullet in the face of the ***** and the guy, don't have to protect the ***** no, you bull

Wow***wwe when I thought chapter 3 was bad, chapter 4 almost made me puke that was so cliche this is basically a bad copy of other trashy novels I'm guessing he'll go to the isle of women without consequences, he's immortal with zenkai boost would've saved him the time if he just asked to be God ffs