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Review Detail of RuBimba in Transmigrated as an NTR’ed protagonist.

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RuBimba
RuBimbaLv103yrRuBimba

First and foremost i want to tell you that i binge read this up to 50chaps And trust I was frustrated beyond reasoning Why? *Spoilers* I don't like Mc - He always lead by his nose, Author tried to make him too realistic that he forget when he passed the border of reasoning No romance or so even upto 50 Even after interacting with 6 or 7 potential harem girls (or so the author portrayed them) his relationship with them doesn't increase a SINGLE BIT! He cut his ties with his two friends girls who are indicated to be in love with him in early chaps probably after getting frustrated or so the first girl loves him deeply but she cucked him and the second girl probably likes him but she does with his best friend jet and acted like nothing wrong, His fav Ms.teach already has a lover and he starts ignoring her, The strict Student councler is a slut in a real sense so he after an event he starts using her as a stress relief that's it, The girl who helped him from suicide starts showing some signs of "trouble"(that's what most probably author tried to show or I misunderstood which I highly not) before she starts distancing from mc, His step mom which also shows sign of getting 'flustered look' when he comes home early which shows she is also in 'trouble' but she didn't tell, Finally Mara the delinquent who falls for his previous self or something like this but then she starts leads him by nose in every way possible even though she loves him she still shows signs of 'trouble' and I don't know what author trying to do in ch42 that irked me SO MUCH she gets drunk and her two friends girls starts taking advantage of her body and records it before sending the mc (that vibes the disturbing ntr) after that the mc like always gets frustrated and cut ties with her because of that video late at night on phone call Overall this novel overly uses the raope and unwilling se.x trope and most of all it all happens with the every female character that interacts and makes a some bond with the mc And also he doesn't do anything to jet who spies on his pc and phone and betrayed him giving those access to the strict councilor who uses those access and erased the evidence that can result him to be expelled from the college which is a great deal to him and he acts like nothing when he meets him like SERIOUSLY Author if you want to make your novel more realistic you have failed really well and even after reading 50chaps the mc doesn't gives a damn to those who related to him and I'm... disappointed in him He knows everything thing but still.. If author wanted to give an excuse that these all girls are "just potential harem girls" and not official then please let us know why wasted Up to 50chap this doesn't explain anything at all ... just a disappointed reader

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Transmigrated as an NTR’ed protagonist.

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Thank you for writing a review and sticking with my story for so long, even though you were frustrated. Though I want to correct something and answer your question. Jet didn't spy on him. I don't know how you come up with this assumption but it's wrong. I've never wanted to make an excuse about girls. Never did I stated that all the girls the mc sees are potential harem members. It was actually the opposite. Out of all the girls I introduced, two are future harem members, one is a potential harem member, while all the other are side characters. As for why there was no romance so far, it's simple. I can't put a lot of tags. I chose a slow-pace tag over a slow romance tag. And slow romance tag means close to no romance in the first hundred chapters or so. Also, I've stated this time and time again. The mc is a beta, weak, worthless, bad character, whatever word suits you. And he acts like one. Is he guided by others? Yes, he is. Is he narrow-minded? Yes, he is. Would he grow? Yes, he will. Will he become a 'good' guy like the same characters from other novels? No, he will not. He will develop other bad traits, but I as an author won't hide behind the double standards and defend his actions. He isn't likable in a sense a 'chad' character is. The one who fucks everyone, faceslaps everyone, who outsmart enemies with lackluster schemes. And liked by the people who self-inserts themselves as the said character. My job is to TRY and make him an interesting character. There were some scenes that I've written and felt that it came out great, shit, or ok. I as an author can't judge the story objectively, so I can't say to you if it's shit or not. Other readers can. However, what I can say, that perhaps this novel isn't your cup of tea? And perhaps you shouldn't waste the most precious resource, your time, and read it? I'm grateful to you for sticking with the story for so long. I'm disappointed that I as an author didn't deliver the story to you as well as I envisioned. But I doubt I would change the way I write after few chapters and improve drastically. That's why you should probably leave here.