something I don't understand the girl was filmed now or this is the bad end of her route Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee cool story i just don't give you stones because i still have my story to give but i hope this review will help you
SailusGebel
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LIKEThanks for the review. I think it's a little bit early to judge the story based on so little chapters, but I appreciate that you liked it so far. I hope it won't disappoint you later on. I don't quite understand how the stone works so don't worry. As for the girl, it would be kind of explained later on. I would give a little spoiler/explanation in case my writing didn't manage to convey this properly. Right now the protagonist still thinks this is just a game but it doesn't mean this will never change.
I can spoil you the whole story in the comments. But will I make a good long story if I can write a few sentences and end it? I put the tag slow-paced for a good reason, so maybe this story isn't for you. Still, thanks for giving it a try, I appreciate it.
Vladyka_Rymz:MC's goal is bull****, to return to his world? really? I don't know when the purpose of this MC changes.
will MC go after the chick who betrayed him? will moms/wives/widows/betrayed lovers be love interests?
SailusGebel:I can spoil you the whole story in the comments. But will I make a good long story if I can write a few sentences and end it? I put the tag slow-paced for a good reason, so maybe this story isn't for you. Still, thanks for giving it a try, I appreciate it.
At the moment I'm debating over one girl who "cheated". It will depend on how well I will develop her story arc and personality, but most importantly how readers would react to her. It will be closer to the end of the story. As for the second question, I don't understand it well enough. You mean if he will fall in love with girls who had boyfriends\husband before him?
amaturewriter:will MC go after the chick who betrayed him? will moms/wives/widows/betrayed lovers be love interests?
no...what I asked was will moms/wives/widows/betrayed lovers be love interests [ CEO novel chicks who were raped, cheated by sis and family, etc ]?
SailusGebel:At the moment I'm debating over one girl who "cheated". It will depend on how well I will develop her story arc and personality, but most importantly how readers would react to her. It will be closer to the end of the story. As for the second question, I don't understand it well enough. You mean if he will fall in love with girls who had boyfriends\husband before him?
Yes one of them will be. As for the others, I haven't yet decided. So far I only decided on two girls. I don't want to bloat the harem too much so that I will have a place for girls in the sequel.
amaturewriter:no...what I asked was will moms/wives/widows/betrayed lovers be love interests [ CEO novel chicks who were raped, cheated by sis and family, etc ]?
SailusGebel:Yes one of them will be. As for the others, I haven't yet decided. So far I only decided on two girls. I don't want to bloat the harem too much so that I will have a place for girls in the sequel.