Review Detail of IgnotusMartes in Level Up Legacy

The author refuses to tell a story coherently! He is allergic to transitions. If the chapter ended on a cliffhanger previously, author would just change POV to a new character whose name and appearance you don't know. After reading for a paragraph to get your bearings, there's another abrupt transition back to the cliffhanger. But hours after the interesting event occurred. Just leaving you feeling empty. It seems that unofficially, MC's real skill is plot-armor. By chapter 30 MC's life if saved 3-4 times, not by his own cunning or skills, but random people showing up. Since author is somehow in a rush to move on to the next scene, even less attention is paid to the world building. So you barely feel like you know the world. All that being said, the story is interesting enough to give it a chance. My will was just too weak to do so.