Review Detail of o1dVersion in GOT/ASOIAF: A Game of Ice and Fire

I’m really sorry to have wasted your time 😓 I really hope you find what you are looking for. Not sure if you’ve noticed it, but I’m currently rewriting this story. Although other than reworking the segments most of my readers had described as info dumps, nothing about the core story has changed. So the Gamer elements will continue, which you’ve led me to believe, by your review, is your main problem with my fic.

Don't get me wrong. My main problem is not system itself, but how it is impacting the story. which is almost negligible. There's a lot of stuff that you could just Skipp and don't bother with. And it's actually a real shame as your writing on it's own is quite good. Oh well, I can only wish you success in your endeavours and I would actually like to see what you can do if you get rid of system or keep things relevant at least. In next fic may be?)

Thanks 😁 perhaps I can convince you to take a look at my other fics, none of them have the system/gamer tag. 😅 They are a little old in my quality of writing, but I believe they are still worth the read.