Review Detail of Traps_Are_Gay in GOT/ASOIAF: A Game of Ice and Fire

Writing Quality 3* Not the best but definitely above the webnovel average; readable. Story Development 2* Seems like it's not GoT/ASOIAF are he mc trusts everyone and goes around telling secrets. Character Design 2* the author trust to make him seem manipulative but from all his stupid decisions we can tell he's just naive and foolishly trusting (in his miniscule abilities). Updating Stability 1* if you're here to read consistently just leave the updates were slow a year ago and they're still slow. World Background 2* This author has made the same mistake as most fanfiction authors would. Simply because it's a story that already exist doesn't mean you don't describe this in detail; geography, world powers, territories, culture. (not to mention the works been done for you just head to the wiki) Overall 2.0* However minus 1* Reason: mc tells random that he's from another world for absolutely no reason it's the reason I dropped. New Overall 1* Tips for improvement: Grammar has minimal mistakes, describe the world more it's very important, your character is the type i hate 2nd most the kind who THINKS that they're smart, The pace of the story is too slow when compared to his strength either speed the pace or nerf him both are kinds impossible at this point, Update more and do it consistently.