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Review Detail of troutrun in Seeking the Dao in the Seemingly Mundane Mortal World

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This is a transmigration story like others before where the MC takes over a body and has a knowledgeable spirit master to help guide him to cultivate. The interesting and enjoyable part of this story for me is where the MC takes a backseat and is more like an observer as the plot unfolds around him. The author does an excellent job of highlighting characters around the MC and provide very reasonable points of views for all the characters, even the villains. There are no young master drama, face slapping or unnecessary killing. SPOILER: I completed reading the raws for this story. After the wonderful first volume/arc, the story tanks for me. It becomes a harem focused, women chasing drama with all beauties (15+ ish) falling for the MC as he explore the world and gets involve with their dramas. The MC even gets his master, his personal disciple and her aunt, his not blood related sister and her master, etc... you get the point. The author admits at the end of the story that he made the change due to low subscriptions from the first arc and doubled the subscriptions after focusing on the harem, which is too bad because this could have been a unique and interesting story.

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Seeking the Dao in the Seemingly Mundane Mortal World

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šŸ˜Ÿā˜¹thanks for the warning. The beginning was so good I was going to do the work to find the rest of the story. Now I won't. It makes me sad though, intelligent stories will have smaller numbers, at first. But they have staying power and grow by word of mouth. no new classics these days. Everyone loses faith in their story and audience. They abandon the intellectual for instant success and play to the lowest common denominator. Their stories dissappeare just as quickly. If they would stay the course...there is a hole in the market for intellectual stories. they grow slower but their fans are loyal and they last forever. Good stories never hide in the shadows forever. Eventually, everyone knows them. This is why all the original star trek originally got canceled before it got popular. Now look at the new star trek. How long's it gonna last. My bet, not long. so sad.