Review Detail of Rojikku in Villain Cultivator

wow, finally the first comment about the language....So basically i just read the first chapter, but holy so many mistakes and not pleasent to read.... Though i will still continue bc the reviews are good and i didnt really see people complaining aboit the language (so i hope it gets better), but still so many mistakes in the first chapter (Structur of sentences, Pronouns etc....)

I actually said the English was fine. I'm pretty picky, too. Perhaps in some places I would have phrased things differently, but I have no complaints. I've seen novels where they don't even use periods. Everything in this novel is clear and smooth, with very minimal room to complain. Nothing stood out as bad when I reread part of the first chapter just now for you.