Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in Transmigrated as the Blind Empress

Fascinating. This is the first Rule 63 story that I'd ever encountered on this site so pardon me for my lack of story critique. Grammar-wise, there's nothing too egregious beyond some lacking commas or incorrect uses of punctuation. Easy fix. Dialogue-wise, it fits the time period it's in, fairly formal and stiff. Prose also flows naturally, complimenting the dialogue.. Good read. Keep on writing👍