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Brian70707
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Dropped at chapter 3 for following reasons 1 grammar is awfull 2 attempts at creating conspiracies within MCs back story is fucking pointless 3 instead of Having MC remember numbers from a lottery ticket just gives her 5 billion dollars for preparation 4 the lawyer who is giving her the mothers will, with assets within the billions would have teams of lawyers not a singular one, and it need to at least be signed for or it would be followed up by some government it wouldn't be possible for it to go to in-laws 5 petty excuse for no father in her life, even worse excuse for mother Chapter 1 was average to great your story went to shit moment you deviated from preparing for apocalypse

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Isabella's Magical Space

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Brian70707
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My honest opinion