Review Detail of WebNovelSins in The Heroes’ Reincarnation

I gave it a read, and honestly I agree with many points. My personal idea of a fully immersive VR game might be different, even false. The reason why the gods and goddesses cannot interfere with the world will be in a future chapter, one of my latest slightly expanding on that. The fate twisting chance will also be explained later, and their previous world and how it works. Your assumption about my identity is off, english is my first language, I just don’t have experience when it comes to writing stories. Perhaps I should change it. Looking forward to the future criticism, after all it’s my first time someone explained the faults and pros of my own novel.