Review Detail of BrazilNobAutor in Naruto: Bloodline Saiyan
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English is not my language, I use some applications to correct some errors, but it does not correct everything, Some sentences can be changed in the middle of the sentence . ... Creative ideas, mission, OC, some directions in history, constructive criticism are always welcome. Thank you.
Naruto: Bloodline Saiyan
BrazilNobAutor
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The mc won't have a tail, He's like gohan or goten, He's not a "Saiyan" He's got a blood limit (Like Hyuga, Uchiha, Uzumaki) He just turned into SSJ, but there are 3 stages, Enough for him stay at the height of the world even asleep.
Neminem_Umbra:quick question about the limit will the mc be able transform or have a monkey tail?
BrazilNobAutor:The mc won't have a tail, He's like gohan or goten, He's not a "Saiyan" He's got a blood limit (Like Hyuga, Uchiha, Uzumaki) He just turned into SSJ, but there are 3 stages, Enough for him stay at the height of the world even asleep.
An OC, called "Kyomi Uchiha" If I'm not mistaken it was made by a Brazilian, There are several arts that made her famous and I fell in love with these arts, you can easily search for it on Google.
Melshan:Will the MC have a girlfriend / wife? if so, can you tell me who?
BrazilNobAutor:The mc won't have a tail, He's like gohan or goten, He's not a "Saiyan" He's got a blood limit (Like Hyuga, Uchiha, Uzumaki) He just turned into SSJ, but there are 3 stages, Enough for him stay at the height of the world even asleep.