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Review Detail of Dyrem in The Ultimate Support Character

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Dyrem
DyremAuthor3yrDyrem

After around more than half a year of writing this novel, I'm still at Volume 2 of what I planned to do in this novel. That's why to ease those who are still on the fence whether to pick this up or not, I will be listing the Pros and Cons of what you should expect if you ever decide to try or pick this book up. Cons -Harem(This is a Pro and Con. Why did I list it here? Because some will surely see it as rushed since some information about the Harem Members weren't revealed until later in the story. Though you can spoil yourself at one of the auxiliary chapters.) -One Perspective. (Everything will be in the MC's perspective. Like I've written in my not-so-shameless review months ago. You might find it limited since you can only see the world as it unravels before MC's eyes and you will only be privy to his thoughts and guesses about the other characters. I never switched perspective and it will stay that way until I finish this) -Confusing First Chapters? (I don't think this as a con really. But if you start reading, you'll see numerous comments about readers who thought they already know the entire story from the decision the MC did or how the characters interacted with him. There isn't a established world yet so don't expect everything will be explained in it. If that puts you off as well, then this is in the right category. Anyways…) Pros -Harem (As I have said, this is also a pro. None of those who joined his harem will be forgotten and they are all important to the story. They will grow along the MC and the ones he will mainly support.) -Weak to Strong (You will see how he grows from the bottom up to the point that he's already stronger than most of the Heroes, not only through the stats but also for his versatility. Still he will stick to his role most of the time as the Ultimate Support but if it comes to it, he could step up and try to end the battle as soon as possible or drag it until his opponent reveals a weakness. He's not someone who will fight a losing battle when he's already strong enough. So expect that he'd only either win a fight or retreat when things will not result in a win after a dragged out battle.) -Well-structured Power Levels (I can say that I put a lot of thought to every world's Cultivation Pathway. Each of them are detailed enough to stand on their own for someone to reach the Transcendent Realm but at the same time, they're all closely related. As of the current chapter, there are five established Pathways and you will see the MC cultivate each of them from scratch or at least until the 3rd one.) -MC's Mysterious Identity (You wouldn't see him as someone who has a grand goal of becoming the strongest in the whole universe, his goals might seem unclear for now because of his identity being an ongoing mystery. And that will be slowly unraveled throughout the story. You will probably read some of the theories put out by readers if you delve deep enough in the story. And of course, it will not stay that way. His real identity will soon be revealed before the step up to the next stage of the story.) I guess this is all for now. I will add more if I see that I missed something but I still have more chapters to write so, you can be the judge of your own. Hate or Like the story and the characters, I will give you that judgement. Just don't start attacking an author personally if you don't like what you read. It's easy to drop a book and not be a prick. Constructive criticisms are welcome and I will answer to them if they're reasonable enough. When this novel reached one year old, I will create another review.

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The Ultimate Support Character

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Blinddesire
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A more honest review by the Author definitely is a plus in deciding to read a story. one thing i must say since you put harem as both pro and con, is that the biggest problem with harems in stories is that they often feel forced into a story for drama sake and really contribute little else to the plot. but since you have said they are important to the story... i have a hope it isn't just to cause endless drama.

Dyrem
DyremAuthorDyrem

there's no unnecessary drama to his harem. In fact, it's either he's as strong as them or they're stronger than him. None of them really needed saving or will be put to danger just for the sake of a power up

Blinddesire:A more honest review by the Author definitely is a plus in deciding to read a story. one thing i must say since you put harem as both pro and con, is that the biggest problem with harems in stories is that they often feel forced into a story for drama sake and really contribute little else to the plot. but since you have said they are important to the story... i have a hope it isn't just to cause endless drama.
thornwoodracing
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After reading 147 chapters.. i found it interesting to read. But the fact he focues himself away from being a support is pretty clear and other than a few skills the system gives him... he focuses all development towards being a non support class. So the title is pretty misleading unless it is ment towards being emotional support.

Dyrem
DyremAuthorDyrem

Focuses away huh. If that's what you think then so be it. I'm not inclined to give any spoiler here.

thornwoodracing:After reading 147 chapters.. i found it interesting to read. But the fact he focues himself away from being a support is pretty clear and other than a few skills the system gives him... he focuses all development towards being a non support class. So the title is pretty misleading unless it is ment towards being emotional support.
Lone_Philosopher
Lone_PhilosopherLv4Lone_Philosopher

Dear Author.... Won't he netori Yse...?? And will we never more of Ophelia ..?

Dyrem
DyremAuthorDyrem

Don't you feel bad for Ezyn? lol. This isn't stealing spree so there's no reason for him to do that when they're allies

Lone_Philosopher:Dear Author.... Won't he netori Yse...?? And will we never more of Ophelia ..?
Lone_Philosopher
Lone_PhilosopherLv4Lone_Philosopher

my bad I guess... 😅😥

Dyrem:Focuses away huh. If that's what you think then so be it. I'm not inclined to give any spoiler here.
Merchant0000
Merchant0000Lv13Merchant0000

isn't this comment itself hidden spoiler😅

Dyrem:Focuses away huh. If that's what you think then so be it. I'm not inclined to give any spoiler here.
Alemax08
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what i need to know is, if you will complete this novel ? I'm sick and tired of reading good novels that get dropped 😓

alphacruze
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seconded

Alemax08:what i need to know is, if you will complete this novel ? I'm sick and tired of reading good novels that get dropped 😓
CardChiken_16
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I'm new here but I kinda give it a shot 😃[img=recommend][img=exp]

Brian70707
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Your first chapter puts me off reading your story Adaptability for writing is utterly weak even if practical Alot of the dialogue was jarring due to common sense that makes the principle and female seem like idiots Reasons for being "heroes" idiotic - they go to another world to stop war understandable but why not try uniting own world before going to others The principles clairvoyance is idiotic - talks as if their is only 30 worlds that need saving to save ours and their is ONLY 30 people with the capability ( re watch Dr strange)

KFCmicchicken
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😭😭 its happened, Its been a month and no update. has it been Dropped

Alemax08:what i need to know is, if you will complete this novel ? I'm sick and tired of reading good novels that get dropped 😓
KFCmicchicken
KFCmicchickenLv14KFCmicchicken

I really like this story, but i see its been a month since last update. has this story been dropped or just taken a break ?? 😭😭

shadowfox9801
shadowfox9801Lv15shadowfox9801

is this completed or dropped? the premise grabbed my attention but I do t want to read a partial book.

Dyrem:there's no unnecessary drama to his harem. In fact, it's either he's as strong as them or they're stronger than him. None of them really needed saving or will be put to danger just for the sake of a power up
shadowfox9801
shadowfox9801Lv15shadowfox9801

have you dropped the book or is it finished?

Dyrem:there's no unnecessary drama to his harem. In fact, it's either he's as strong as them or they're stronger than him. None of them really needed saving or will be put to danger just for the sake of a power up
Doaist_DragonBZ
Doaist_DragonBZLv4Doaist_DragonBZ

is there yuri in this?