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Review Detail of littlefrench in Pokemon the Journey

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This story is not exactly bad, th main problem being the grammar and it actually gets worse as one keeps reading there is a despairing need for a checking otherwise the story is not bad, the ideas are interesting, it feels too easy though, even if he is a genius he progresses too fast compared to others for someone who has the same level of pokemon knowledge as anyone else. the Novel tries to have a more realistic feel than the anime, which leads to good ideas a bad point lies in the dialogues, they are utterly plain and they would gain a lot by being described a lot more

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