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please get an editor, while i didnt see any spelling errors which makes me happy, the sentence structure is awful. also please check to make sure that you arent trying to make a wors that doesnt have a plural form into a plural word. preys should just be prey, i didnt see it but please dont use equipments just equipment, etc

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Into the Zombie World

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yeah, that's on the early chapters. thanks for reading.

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thanks for the advice btw.