Usual apocalyptic stories are really hard to explain, but you explain it very well😭😭. _my favorite line is "Nike is using his jaywalking skills to the maxium" hilariously funny. _characters well presented😇 _the 2 chapter at the beginning have me naruto vibes😂😂 As for suggestions there's none really but keep your story understandable when it comes to action parts.
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