Review Detail of Thenoicemaster in Goku and the Olympians
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Book is ass it didnt get a single thing right for one zeus would be shivering in fear from King piccolo one of the first few big baddies all the titans and gods and giants combined cant touch a hair on master roshi ij his muscle form when he first destroys the moon that how weak the olypian gods are the only reason fights in dbz dont destroy planets immediately is because most villains cant survive in space shown by Vegeta when he first comes to earth to deal with goku this book is a waste of time and gor all my knowledge i dont even know what the other reader were doing when they said book was five stars there are also a lot of grammatical mistakes and erroRs and typos dont read i wasted my time on this
Goku and the Olympians
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How did I not get Goku’s character right? From what I can tell, I’ve written him pretty accurately. Goku isn’t one to antagonize the gods for no reason. He only fights when someone directly challenges him, as I’ve shown with Artemis and the Hunters. Also, it’s my story. I can make the Greek Gods as strong as I want to. Keep in mind that the gods were able to manipulate stars and constellations effortlessly in the original myths. The Percy Jackson series has been pretty inconsistent in terms power scaling all throughout its run, so I simply gave the Gods, including Zeus and Ares, a bit of a buff. Sorry if you have a problem with that, but that’s just how I wrote the story. There isn’t really a need to insult me either. Like I said, you don’t need to like or read this story. Just understand that I’m not even close to being done with it, so things could change in the future.
Thenoicemaster:Im pretty sure zeus’s biggest feat of strength was when he split a mountain in half goku did that and more as a kid when he saw master roshi do kameyamaha Wave for the first time and copied him he stopped a forest fire and destroyed a mansion and split the mountain learn your facts before you come on to the plot if you cant even get facts that are easy to see in wiki then dont come up ro me on how wrong i am when jason begged his father for help and he split a mountain. And suddenly these gods of such weak power that genos could wipe them out dare say that they can touch a hair on goku and author didnt even get goku’s character right it started to slip after a while fool
If all you care about is powerscaling, then I kindly suggest you leave. You didn’t criticise anything about the actual writing, plot, or dialogue. That’s not how a review should work. Also, just so you know, saying the Greek Gods are only King Piccolo levels of power is absurd. You’re incredibly biased towards Dragon Ball and didn’t even give the Percy Jackson side of this fanfic a chance. It’s pretty ironic that you complained about grammatical errors when you have no punctuation in your writing as well. You don’t have to like this story, but hating it for arbitrary reasons like that just isn’t right. If you want to criticize something, actually give criticism that relates to...well, the story. And one more thing. Goku did use Kaioken against the Hydra, but that was just to show off. It’s called holding back and he’s done it plenty of times before.
Im pretty sure zeus’s biggest feat of strength was when he split a mountain in half goku did that and more as a kid when he saw master roshi do kameyamaha Wave for the first time and copied him he stopped a forest fire and destroyed a mansion and split the mountain learn your facts before you come on to the plot if you cant even get facts that are easy to see in wiki then dont come up ro me on how wrong i am when jason begged his father for help and he split a mountain. And suddenly these gods of such weak power that genos could wipe them out dare say that they can touch a hair on goku and author didnt even get goku’s character right it started to slip after a while fool
Doodleboy565:If all you care about is powerscaling, then I kindly suggest you leave. You didn’t criticise anything about the actual writing, plot, or dialogue. That’s not how a review should work. Also, just so you know, saying the Greek Gods are only King Piccolo levels of power is absurd. You’re incredibly biased towards Dragon Ball and didn’t even give the Percy Jackson side of this fanfic a chance. It’s pretty ironic that you complained about grammatical errors when you have no punctuation in your writing as well. You don’t have to like this story, but hating it for arbitrary reasons like that just isn’t right. If you want to criticize something, actually give criticism that relates to...well, the story. And one more thing. Goku did use Kaioken against the Hydra, but that was just to show off. It’s called holding back and he’s done it plenty of times before.
When will you return bro? I know your busy with college and stuff but i actually really like your story. Everything about it feels well done. I read ur stories on Fanfic's not here so I'll have to check when you reply
Doodleboy565:How did I not get Goku’s character right? From what I can tell, I’ve written him pretty accurately. Goku isn’t one to antagonize the gods for no reason. He only fights when someone directly challenges him, as I’ve shown with Artemis and the Hunters. Also, it’s my story. I can make the Greek Gods as strong as I want to. Keep in mind that the gods were able to manipulate stars and constellations effortlessly in the original myths. The Percy Jackson series has been pretty inconsistent in terms power scaling all throughout its run, so I simply gave the Gods, including Zeus and Ares, a bit of a buff. Sorry if you have a problem with that, but that’s just how I wrote the story. There isn’t really a need to insult me either. Like I said, you don’t need to like or read this story. Just understand that I’m not even close to being done with it, so things could change in the future.