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Doodleboy565

Doodleboy565

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Hi! I'm currently a 23-year-old college graduate who hopes to become an animator for TV and film someday. I love coming up with my own characters and storylines, but writing fanfiction is fun as well.

2020-06-16 JoinedUnited States
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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5655mth
    Replied to shadowfin151

    Not really, but the next chapter will be posted this week. I mainly write new chapters when I have time to, because I'm currently busy with work.

    Ch 17 Roadblock
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    Goku and the Olympians
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    Doodleboy5658mth
    Replied to Nob7

    Not exactly. The two main pairings are Toph and Ty Lee, but while they'll both like Goku, he won't reciprocate their feelings until later on.

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    Doodleboy5658mth
    Replied to Nob7

    Yes, there will. Toph will be Goku's main love interest.

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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5658mth
    Replied to PJChicken

    Fang, Roku's dragon, has wings.

    From within this portal, a blue, serpentine dragon speedily snaked through. His large wings flapped in rhythmic tandem, beating more frequently as it moved closer toward Goku.
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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5659mth
    Replied to God_of_hentai

    Actually, Chapter 14 was posted on here 3 years ago. I just deleted everything and rewrote Chapters 1-11. 12, 13, and 14’s rewrites will be posted this week, and then Chapter 15 will be finished sometime after that. It’s technically a new story at this point.

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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5659mth
    Replied to Lisa_Silvan

    I do address this in later chapters, but my intention was to have it so Goku was holding back to make his fight against Ares more interesting. But again, it's my fault for not making that clearer, so if you dislike the story, that's perfectly understandable. Sorry you didn't enjoy it.

    Ch 8 The Strongest Under the Heavens
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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5653yr
    Replied to Thenoicemaster

    How did I not get Goku’s character right? From what I can tell, I’ve written him pretty accurately. Goku isn’t one to antagonize the gods for no reason. He only fights when someone directly challenges him, as I’ve shown with Artemis and the Hunters. Also, it’s my story. I can make the Greek Gods as strong as I want to. Keep in mind that the gods were able to manipulate stars and constellations effortlessly in the original myths. The Percy Jackson series has been pretty inconsistent in terms power scaling all throughout its run, so I simply gave the Gods, including Zeus and Ares, a bit of a buff. Sorry if you have a problem with that, but that’s just how I wrote the story. There isn’t really a need to insult me either. Like I said, you don’t need to like or read this story. Just understand that I’m not even close to being done with it, so things could change in the future.

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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5653yr
    Replied to Thenoicemaster

    It’s not a mistake, though. I used Kaioken cause I wanted to include it in the story. I’m well aware Goku could oneshot it with one hit, but I wanted the fight to last longer than a second.

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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5653yr
    Replied to Thenoicemaster

    If all you care about is powerscaling, then I kindly suggest you leave. You didn’t criticise anything about the actual writing, plot, or dialogue. That’s not how a review should work. Also, just so you know, saying the Greek Gods are only King Piccolo levels of power is absurd. You’re incredibly biased towards Dragon Ball and didn’t even give the Percy Jackson side of this fanfic a chance. It’s pretty ironic that you complained about grammatical errors when you have no punctuation in your writing as well. You don’t have to like this story, but hating it for arbitrary reasons like that just isn’t right. If you want to criticize something, actually give criticism that relates to...well, the story. And one more thing. Goku did use Kaioken against the Hydra, but that was just to show off. It’s called holding back and he’s done it plenty of times before.

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  • Doodleboy565
    Doodleboy5653yr
    Replied to Fiery_Kids

    I’m confused. What do you mean by that?

    "It most certainly is, but I'm surprised you don't know about it already. Jubilife's quite famous, even in regions outside of Sinnoh." Nurse Joy pondered over Goku's considerable lack of knowledge. How could a Pokémon Trainer planning to explore Sinnoh not know much about it? That seemed a bit counterintuitive to her.
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    Pokemon: Dragon Ball Version
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