Doodleboy565
Hi! I'm currently a 23-year-old college graduate who hopes to become an animator for TV and film someday. I love coming up with my own characters and storylines, but writing fanfiction is fun as well.
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Fang, Roku's dragon, has wings.
I do address this in later chapters, but my intention was to have it so Goku was holding back to make his fight against Ares more interesting. But again, it's my fault for not making that clearer, so if you dislike the story, that's perfectly understandable. Sorry you didn't enjoy it.
How did I not get Goku’s character right? From what I can tell, I’ve written him pretty accurately. Goku isn’t one to antagonize the gods for no reason. He only fights when someone directly challenges him, as I’ve shown with Artemis and the Hunters. Also, it’s my story. I can make the Greek Gods as strong as I want to. Keep in mind that the gods were able to manipulate stars and constellations effortlessly in the original myths. The Percy Jackson series has been pretty inconsistent in terms power scaling all throughout its run, so I simply gave the Gods, including Zeus and Ares, a bit of a buff. Sorry if you have a problem with that, but that’s just how I wrote the story. There isn’t really a need to insult me either. Like I said, you don’t need to like or read this story. Just understand that I’m not even close to being done with it, so things could change in the future.
It’s not a mistake, though. I used Kaioken cause I wanted to include it in the story. I’m well aware Goku could oneshot it with one hit, but I wanted the fight to last longer than a second.
If all you care about is powerscaling, then I kindly suggest you leave. You didn’t criticise anything about the actual writing, plot, or dialogue. That’s not how a review should work. Also, just so you know, saying the Greek Gods are only King Piccolo levels of power is absurd. You’re incredibly biased towards Dragon Ball and didn’t even give the Percy Jackson side of this fanfic a chance. It’s pretty ironic that you complained about grammatical errors when you have no punctuation in your writing as well. You don’t have to like this story, but hating it for arbitrary reasons like that just isn’t right. If you want to criticize something, actually give criticism that relates to...well, the story. And one more thing. Goku did use Kaioken against the Hydra, but that was just to show off. It’s called holding back and he’s done it plenty of times before.
I’m confused. What do you mean by that?